|Reviewed by Victoria's Poetry & Voices of Muse
|beautiful as always Viv
I especially love the claiming
in the last line
this is beautiful
Love's Ethereal Bounty & Caress
|Reviewed by Don Juan Amante
|strong seduction, beautiful sentiments.|
|Reviewed by Rose Rideout
|You can feel the passionate feelings within each line Amber, great write.
Newfie Hugs, Rose
|Reviewed by RM Green
|The sensuality just oozes from these words... powerful write! Lovely...|
|Reviewed by J'nia Fowler
|...............amour expressed so well I can picture the essence of love unrequited. The picture is so perfect for this poem too. Hugs, J'nia|
|Reviewed by Dayvid Graybill
|I love the "illicit thoughts" bookends. And all between is filled with passion! You've drawn me into a lover's space with your words Amber.
|Reviewed by E T Waldron
|mysterious sensuality in this gem of a poem, Amber!
|Reviewed by Dark Knight
|well very passionate, Amber and just who do you want as your Paramour?|
|Reviewed by Christine Alwin
|Deep emotions in a beautiful setting Amber~|
|Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan
|Reviewed by Liana Margiva
|VERY BEAUTIFUL!!!!!!!!!! Liana Margiva|
|Reviewed by Dawn Anderson
|What passion in this, Amber!|
|Reviewed by Karen Palumbo
|Expressions of passions reaching new heighs as your pen flows fluently all the way through. Reach for the stars through the joys of mother earth...
Be always safe,
|Reviewed by Sheila Roy
|Beautifully written. I like how you've welded romance and nature, for they are so closely entwined in spirit. Hugs,
|Reviewed by Emile Tubiana
|Dear Amber, You have a great imagimation and perfect feeling for love.
God Bless you. Emile
|Reviewed by Chantilly Lace (Reader)
|Excellent writing beautiful lady...that photo is divine...oh my....keep smiling always OK..Hugsss..much love to you|
|Reviewed by John Flanagan
|The sheer control in this writing, Amber, is admirable and highly rewarding for the reader; so much thought through and expressed succinctly.
Fine work indeed.
|Reviewed by Mary Lacey, Desertrat
Beautiful metaphoric poem.
|Reviewed by Poetess of The Soul Sheila G
|WOW! My HEART and SOUL is touched beyond! Sweet Viv!
I love this poem and where your heart was, when you were writing it... Hey, I'll call ya'... Some things are taken place shortly, I am going for MY "CULINARY ARTS" degree, is ONE! and Working P.T. shortly... I am feeling my roots... WHERE I need to be NOW!
Love and Hugs Hon, SHEEooox
This intriguing poem will stay with me for a longggg time! TY!
|Reviewed by Christine Tsen
I can relate to this, the ebb and flow, the emptiness and denial giving way to the sweetness and secrets of the heart ~
|Reviewed by TONY NERONE
|I would love to have a "paramour' in my life. But my time has passed me by. Nicely written piece, Dear Lady.
GOD BLESS YOU
|Reviewed by Peter Schlosser (Reader)
|Sounds like the etheric delivery system for Enochian Magic... intriguing, to say the least. These tidal surges rise within, impossible to control; but easy to channel if one is adept in such forbidden arts. I like this poem. Emotive and vivid. Take care.|
|Reviewed by Regis Auffray
|Ah but where would we be without these "illicit thoughts" and the passions that they awaken? Thank you for sharing this engagin offering, Amber. Love and best wishes to you,
|Reviewed by George Carroll
|We who stray leave more than passion behind.|