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Gray Dawn
by Felix LeRoy Perry

Wednesday, October 06, 2010
Rated "PG13" by the Author.
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Gray Dawn

 

 

gray dawn

captures silence

the fog

disguises tears

 

 

the wind

whispers truth

waves say

who cares

 

 

wet splash

nobody heard

a ripple

of a whim

 

 

life breathe

soon forgotten

no mourners

weep for him

 

 

gray dawn…

 

 

 

 

 

 

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Reviewed by Sheila Roy 10/22/2010
A sad tone here, Fee, but you set the dreary, dark imagery well. Hugs,
Sheila
Reviewed by Kathleen McDonald 10/15/2010
such a sad write Fee
hug
Kathy
Reviewed by Jon Willey 10/11/2010
Felix,in our personal silence the questions come and more often than not go unanswered. Our pain unquenched with reason or a hand held out in comforting posture. A "Gray Dawn". The abode of the busy or the lonely heart my friend. Love and peace to you. Jon Michael
Reviewed by Victoria's Poetry & Voices of Muse 10/7/2010
may I rejoice in his life lived
...yet still this reaches to the sorrows gates
inside my heart offering me to see that reality
and to continue to always embrace everyone
for there is importance to every path and every peril

Love's Bounty
Vickie
Reviewed by J'nia Fowler 10/7/2010
Very poignant and somewhat sad in its realness. J'nia
Reviewed by Chantilly Lace (Reader) 10/7/2010
Very sad indeed sweet Fee ..Hopefully this will pass...keep smiling always..Hugss
Reviewed by Mr. Ed 10/7/2010
Sad and Gray, Indeed.
Reviewed by Liana Margiva 10/7/2010
EXCELLENT!!!!!!!!! TALENTED!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Liana Margiva
Reviewed by Paul Judges 10/7/2010
I like the simplicity and feel of this one, Felix
Reviewed by Dayvid Graybill 10/6/2010
Sad words indeed Fee. Good write.

Peace,
Dayvid
Reviewed by Karen Palumbo 10/6/2010
Oh Fee, been there many times, but we must forge forward. I sure hope you are okay...

Be always safe,
Karen
Reviewed by Regis Auffray 10/6/2010
You have created the perfect ambiance for such a sad occurence, Fee. Very poignant. Love and peace,

Regis
Reviewed by Christine Alwin 10/6/2010
Sometimes we hear better from the heart than the ears~
Hugs,
Chrissie
Reviewed by Richard King 10/6/2010
Eloquently said Fee, you possess a skill we all admire. Thank you. Dick
Reviewed by Annabel Sheila 10/6/2010
The picture is so sad, lonely.....the story you've penned must indeed be the thoughts of the person who stands alone at the rail..contemplating.... I have known so many touched by depression...and I've heard a few of them express the sentiment here....beautifully done, Fee. Touched my heart!

Hugs,
Anna
Reviewed by Christine Tsen 10/6/2010
Wow, this is so well-done in melancholy tones ~
So sad and painfully realistic.
Blessings,
Christine
Reviewed by Elisabeth Barstowe 10/6/2010
sad, but oh so beautiful.
Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado 10/6/2010
So simple, yet so elegant, both in image and in verse. Very nice, Fee; well done!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Texas, Karen Lynn. :D
Reviewed by Ed Matlack 10/6/2010
Yep, gray dawns and days can be quite depressing..e
Reviewed by Dawn Anderson 10/6/2010
Fee,such beautiful lines, filled with so much sadness.



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