by Ragno Donna
Wednesday, October 06, 2010
Rated "PG13" by the Author.
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wanting you so much.
no one is calling.
all for the taking.
can't get you out of my head!
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|Reviewed by Don Juan Amante
|a sad state for sure, well penned.|
|Reviewed by Chantilly Lace (Reader)
|Wonderful writing..well done...stay safe and well..Hugss|
|Reviewed by D Johnson
|Ain't that the way love goes? Nice write.
|Reviewed by Dayvid Graybill
|That damn vacant bed! And she's still in my head! I know about that stuff! Love the simple form of this. Good stuff!
|Reviewed by Dark Knight
|LOL-I think you just wrote what a lot of us feel so often-well done|
|Reviewed by Peter Schlosser (Reader)
|Everything has a beginning, middle and end. The universe, as I once heard, never says "no." It only has three answers: yes, not now, or I have something better in store for you. Hope this helps.|
|Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)
|Been there. Done that. From the guy's perspective however. It is a bad way to have to live when your passion is still there for your lover, but his is not for you. I remember feeling like if the world would just please come to an end I would like that. Good work.|
|Reviewed by TONY NERONE
|This was very good. It had an outstanding rhyme too.
From previous writings by you I can tell you were hurt severly by him. A word of advice go to the nearest bar and nurse a drink until some guy buys you another and take it from there. Enjoy Orlando.:)