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| Reviewed by Chantilly Lace (Reader) |
2/25/2011 |
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| Oh my ..this is so beautiful sweet Dan...Hugsss how did I miss this one...sighhhh |
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| Reviewed by richard cederberg |
10/20/2010 |
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Excellent Dan - your talent shines here.
Light and Wisdom ...
richard |
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| Reviewed by Victoria's Poetry & Voices of Muse |
10/19/2010 |
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I love them Dan
especially number one
I wrote only a couple of these
but never as a one liner
it is awesome to venture off the path
and discovery new things!
Dare To Be Different!
Love's Bounty
Vickie |
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| Reviewed by La Belle Rouge Poetess Of The Heart |
10/15/2010 |
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| There is a true comfort to the soul in your poem Dan, just lovely and uplifting. |
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| Reviewed by William Bonilla |
10/14/2010 |
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Excellent pieces all three
well done
Peace be with you
William |
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| Reviewed by Patrick Granfors |
10/13/2010 |
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| Interesting concept and well executed. Now I gotta go look up to see how they work. Patrick |
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| Reviewed by Annabel Sheila |
10/11/2010 |
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Loved them all, Dan! Isn't it grand how you can say so much in so few words! Well done!
Anna |
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| Reviewed by Jon Willey |
10/10/2010 |
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| Dan, the mastery of haiku along with many other literary accomplishments has always eluded me. And then here, you have created a wonderful work my dear friend. I have pondered forever and never will really understand how "God put those clouds in the sky". Evaporation, condensation the law of conservation ultimately fail to truly answer hat question. Thanks for sharing these marvelous haikus with me my dear fried. Love and peace to you. Jon Michael |
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| Reviewed by E T Waldron |
10/10/2010 |
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Really enjoyed all three that had much to say with so few words! Superb,DL!
ET |
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| Reviewed by Mr. Ed |
10/10/2010 |
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| Lots of 'meat' in only three lines. |
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| Reviewed by Elisabeth Barstowe |
10/10/2010 |
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| Beautiful. So much depth packed into those lines. |
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| Reviewed by Dawn Anderson |
10/10/2010 |
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| War, and beautiful. I have never seen one line Haiku before. |
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| Reviewed by John Flanagan |
10/9/2010 |
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Warm, comforting rich lines, Dan.
Fine writing.
John |
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| Reviewed by Dayvid Graybill |
10/9/2010 |
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Beautiful Dan! If clouds block the sun, write about it and it takes the dreariness away. Good stuff!
Peace,
Dayvid |
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| Reviewed by Regis Auffray |
10/9/2010 |
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Your words elicit thought and emotion, Dan. Thank you. Love and peace to you,
Regis |
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| Reviewed by Gene Williamson |
10/9/2010 |
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Thank you for this. I love one line haiku...
a face I haven't seen in years warms the night.
-gene. |
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| Reviewed by Douglas Bentley |
10/9/2010 |
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All very unique
With one common theme
"God's Majestic Creation."
Enjoyed reading Dan - Thanks for the poems |
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