|Reviewed by Sheila Roy
|A great eerie tone to this poem. Feels dreamy, too, as though the protagonist may wake up at any second.
|Reviewed by The Poetess
|A nicely written tale of doom.|
|Reviewed by La Belle Rouge Poetess Of The Heart
|Almost as horrifying as the flu! I hope you are better Andy, it's on both sides of the pond I'm just getting over it too. Stay well.|
|Reviewed by E T Waldron
|Great write. The combo of flu and hallucinating thoughts always go together. They produce good poems like this one;) Hope your back to snuff soon!
|Reviewed by Mr. Ed
|And The Blood Moon arrives soon - October 22nd. BEWARE!|
|Reviewed by Annabel Sheila
|Hope you're feeling better soon Andy....your poem gives me insight into how terrible you must be feeling....well penned!
|Reviewed by Ragno Donna
|Your poem is both chilling and exciting.
Love that photo too.
|Reviewed by Christine Alwin
|Andy, you give me goose bumps...and that photo..wow..I am glad it is morning here..chilling great write~
|Reviewed by TONY NERONE
|I am sorry you are still sick, Andy. Feel better soon. Keep those nasty black birds away.
GOD BLESS YOU
|Reviewed by Tiana ~
|Yeah, I'm not a fan of crows. I guess I watched too many scary movies! lol Awesome, chilling write Andy. Hope you feel better soon.|
|Reviewed by Dawn Anderson
|Crows...it brings a smile to my face, because I remember how frightened my son was when he was about six or seven years old of them. He'd come in from playing in our backyard because he said they were sitting in the big oak watching him. Anyway...this is chilling and well written..has a Poe feel to it.Get better soon, Andy!|
|Reviewed by jude forese
|chillingly effective ...
perhaps the crows flew through your flu ;)
|Reviewed by Morgan Merriweather
|the flu can make you think about jumping into a tomb....any tomb, you didn't notice your name on the way in did you? - hope all is well . Morgan|
|Reviewed by John Flanagan
|Spooky and dark, Andy,
and very well written.
|Reviewed by Christine Tsen
|You do capture tangible darkness here, and it does seem inspired ~
But you had better just drown the buggers in tea and get well.
|Reviewed by Regis Auffray
|Chillingly effective, Andy... ...most apt and timely too considering "All Hallow's Eve" is not that far away. Love and peace to you,
|Reviewed by Paul Berube
|This is a great write, Andy. Well done indeed. Kudos.|
|Reviewed by Jon Willey
|Andy, stay away from the crows. They harbor draconian ways that will doom us all. Send the undertaker away and leave the open lifeless tomb. It was reserved for another. Spooky, eh what. How morbidity rears itself when we are weak. You must never offer challenge to the powers of the "Killing Moon". An entertaining write Andy. Just right for Halloween. Love and peace to you my friend. Jon Michael|