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I will wait
by dan Rosenhagen
Thursday, October 14, 2010
Rated "G" by the Author.
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We will all wait, just as, we have been waited for.

 I will wait


Without the presence of mortals upon the earth,

seasons would cycle, flowers would take root, live and bloom, oceans would rage and then become calm, and the movements of the skies follow their fashion.

Planets would rotate on axis as they are caught in orbit.  All of life would be disciplined as to their functions, following the “Order of Intension,” the intension of “Eternal law”.


Then so, when we are visitors in another’s temple, out of respect for the proprietor, we should abide by the rules he has set for his household.

 It is often either the rebellious one, and one who follows his ego, that cannot comply to the rules of the household. 

As time performs its changes, it is delightfully interesting that the rebellious one tends to eventually ascend from what he has learned during his constant defining and redefining of his own rebellion. 

And the man who was intent on loving his own ego, finds himself foreign to his own environment, that is life giving.

 As he bites the hand that feeds him,

I love him, and will wait indefinitely for him to realize, who and what he is.





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Reviewed by Karen Palumbo 10/15/2010
A philosophical journey with God at the helm, inspirationally soothing...

Be always safe,
Reviewed by Christine Tsen 10/15/2010
Truly profound, it is an unexpected journey!
Reviewed by Paul Judges 10/15/2010
Very accomplished piece.
Reviewed by Victoria's Poetry & Voices of Muse 10/15/2010
this is such a wonderful piece of poetry Dan
we bite the hands that feed us
and even bite our noses to spite our face
I know I have experienced the metaphoric insight
and deeply cherish the valuable lessons from it...

and as for the homes & temples I so agree with it.
We go to other countries and we tell people how to live.
It is outrageous to me not just because of war & hatred
but the telling them how they should be...we would not like
another country to come into our soil and tell us how to live
or rule...
You insights are greatly valued
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