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Damage is Done
by OnepoetGem *the Poetic Rapper
Friday, October 15, 2010
Rated "G" by the Author.
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Michael Jackson never had a chance, neither do many involved in romance. |
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Once the face hits air
the devil will give a stare
Surely it isn't quite fair
A child is suppose to be
born innocent of all charges
Maybe so
however right after his birth
the damages enlarges
They start traveling in
on barges
Right on up until maybe
the police charges
Society protects juveniles up
until a certain age
Afterwards their trespasses
begin to list on the page
They'll be lucky not to
end up in a cage
especially if they fail to
control their anger and rage
which would be sage
Some children abused and
neglected
and not properly directed
become grown persons
basically dissected
They never overcome the
alcohol or drugs injected
From baby to man
we all are either in the
devil or Creators plan
for the rest of our life span
Isn't life just grand
opg
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| Reviewed by Regis Auffray |
10/16/2010 |
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Substance to think about, OPG; an apt and timely message about life in this world. Love and peace to you,
Regis |
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| Reviewed by Karen Palumbo |
10/15/2010 |
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Think it is so disheartening and sad how society as a whole no longer values life, the one gift we all need to treasure...
Be always safe,
Karen |
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| Reviewed by - - - - - TRASK |
10/15/2010 |
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Even Tho They Are Not Your Children You As I Are Is Just As Responsible For Their Welfare,i.e.It Doesn't Always Take $ Save Kid--**PEER PRESSURE WORKS...
I Am **Result Of 2nd Like Daddy Who Taught Me Well--Where Ever He Bill Is If In Holy Hell I Will Go To Hell & Back Save His Soul...
If Not Then: {{{ DAMAGE IS (DID) DONE }}}}}
TRASK... |
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| Reviewed by E T Waldron |
10/15/2010 |
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You speak the hard truth,OPG, and we all should take heed,and try to do better!Blessings to you and yours!
Love,
Eileen |
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| Reviewed by Lew Duffey |
10/15/2010 |
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Oh yes, just grand. And why does this remind me of that song Elvis sang? In he ghetto?
God bless,
Lew |
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| Reviewed by Paul Judges |
10/15/2010 |
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| Powerfully conveyed, OnepoetGem |
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