|Reviewed by Victoria's Poetry & Voices of Muse
|the message in this poem is so utterly meaningful
I am especially fond too of the first stanza
it is beautiful...as is the wholeness here
Sand and Shore
|Reviewed by Christine Volkoff
|There is enough in this poem to feed years of meditation. Two options, indeed...absolutely profound, great metaphor, so well done!|
|Reviewed by Mary Lacey, Desertrat
Life is a fragile thing. I love your metaphor of the sand castle, although it can be beautiful, is always knocked down and we have to start over. Great Write.
|Reviewed by Christine Alwin
|Make me think of the song "Do it anyway" by Martina Mcbride..this is beauiful~|
|Reviewed by Felix Perry
|Very wonderfully done Deb as you capture such a great methaphor...can almost feel the sand on my bare feet and smell the brine in the air...
|Reviewed by steve Chering
|Nice tidy finish. Now clear up that sand.
well done ...steve
|Reviewed by Liana Margiva
|VERY NICE!!!!!!!!!!! I LOVE IT!!!!!!!!!!!!! Liana Margiva|