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Makes U Wonder
by OnepoetGem *the Poetic Rapper
Sunday, October 17, 2010
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If a man's not wondering, he's not really living, and you can almost forget loving and forgiving. I use to wonder about love, I no longer wonder, cause I corrected my blunder. But it did not stop the lightening and thunder.

We know about first man
what about last man's span
Are we living in the day
when last man will disappear away
because of all the sin and decay
or will God allow us to live
if enough of us love and forgive
Will survival be fact
if we clean up our act

Speaking of God
we're suppose to be made from sod
If the flesh doesn't matter
why all the sinful brain scatter
Flesh can get served up on a platter
depending what an animal is after
If flesh doesn't mean anything
the body shouldn't be guilty of nothing
The body gets blamed
then the name gets shamed
as the soul sits back protected
After the body dies it flies off
freely disconnected
from a being that never was perfected
Man and soul become dissected
It all seems insane
cause the body feels the pain
and has less to gain
The body seems to live in vain
with the devil bringing the acid rain
Man can end up only a blood stain
at the least almost insane
barely missing the drain

Makes you wonder
when man will finally go under
and when the end comes
will God be the first responder
to prevent the devil from
bringing lightening and thunder
finally admitting that our existence
was a mistaken blunder
Maybe the Creator will ponder
then as a forgiving God
not take us under



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Reviewed by Chessly Nesci 10/21/2010
With God in our hearts we will never go under!! LOve, and peace always!! ~Chessly
Reviewed by William Bonilla 10/18/2010
Excellent write Grady
If one dose not wonder
He'll stay idle
as time passes him by
Most enjoyable reading
Peace be with you Brother

Reviewed by Lew Duffey 10/17/2010
Makes U think alright.
I do believe our existance is not a blunder.
We did that ourselves.
God bless,
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