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Monster Storm
by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner
Monday, September 30, 2002

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Verse ONE
I can feel the storm approachin', in my bones,
And I can tell it's gonna be a bad one,
There's gonna be a lot of damage tonight,
Lives ripped apart when the storm's finally done.

Verse TWO

When you come home late, from a night on the town,
I'm scared...i don't know if you're gonna be mean,
I tuck the children safely into their beds,
They're too young to witness you makin' a scene.


Your abuse is like an approachin' storm,
It's causin' great harm and devastation,
You're succeedin' in tearin' your family down,
Better get control of the situation.


It's gettin' darker with each passin' hour,
Flash!! brilliant lightnin' splits the turbulent skies,
And thunder shatters the black clouds overhead,
Wind drivin' rain pours down, and the waters rise.

Verse FOUR

Staggerin' in, you slap me across the face,
Screamin' at me...a high pitched noise fills my ears,
It's my two little boys...they've seen what you've done,
Tryin' to protect spite of their fears.


I'm gettin' away from the approachin' storm,
I ain't gonna put up with this any more,
I'll stay below ground, 'til the storm goes away,
I'm done with the it's time to soar


Your abuse is like an approachin' storm,
It's causin' great harm and devastation,
You're succeedin' in tearin' your family down,
Better get control of the situation.


Yeah, your abuse is like an approachin' storm
I'm gettin' control of the situation...

thought this would make a great country song!

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Reviewed by Larry Skahill 10/1/2002
perfect country song
Reviewed by jude forese 9/30/2002
i can feel the country melody...
Reviewed by Sandie Angel 9/30/2002
Fantastic write, fantastic song!!!!!

May Lu $*_*$ / Sandie Angel :o)
Reviewed by Marilyn Seray 9/30/2002
Karla, that concert really got to you didn't it! Fantastic song
Reviewed by Trixie Love 9/30/2002
Hi Karla,
I am with Eileen...
Sounds good to me :)

Reviewed by Mitzi Jackson 9/30/2002
sounds good to me!!!!
you go girlie
Reviewed by E T Waldron 9/30/2002
Karla, I'm inclined to agree with you, it is perfectly suited for country! Hope you can do something with it. All the best;-)
Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado 9/30/2002
yes, it sure would. sounds like a top ten hit for sure!! great job, karla!! love, your twin, karen lynn. (((HUGS)))
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