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What If .. . . ..
by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner
Tuesday, October 19, 2010
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Thank you, Star Dancer, for inspiring these lines. =]

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Autumn.Leaves us with
a sense of loss. Why
does dying have to be
so sad .. . . .. and yet,
so beautiful?

But what if meant new
beginnings? What if
it signified unchartered
paths just waiting to
be explored?

Would we mourn, then?

What if .. . . ..

(c) 2010, Karla Dorman (10/19)

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Reviewed by Sheila Roy	10/22/2010

Thoughtful, Karla. I like the imagery here. Perfect timing. Hugs, Sheila




Reviewed by D. Vaineo	10/21/2010

Nice write... Always, Deborah




Reviewed by Chessly Nesci	10/21/2010

Karla, Love this!!!After finding my father this is what I hoped for!! A new beginning with no pain, or sadness. I think the mourning would be less because then we would know it wasn't so final...What if? Excellent write!! LOve, and peace always!! ~Chessly




Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan	10/20/2010

the sadness comes, i think, in our not knowing-lovely write




Reviewed by Mr. Ed	10/20/2010

What If, Indeed.




Reviewed by Dawn Anderson	10/19/2010

Karla, this is so beautiful...so much truth to your words...it's all in how we look at life!




Reviewed by Michelle Kidwell Power In The Pen	10/19/2010

Wow this one touches home today thank you for sharing In Christs Love Michelle~




Reviewed by Karen Palumbo	10/19/2010

"What if....." expresses the abstract is such a beautiful and profound manner.... Be always safe, Karen




Reviewed by John Flanagan	10/19/2010

When we learn to push aside the temporary and the clutter it brings we move to the essentials and we celebrate. Fine work, Karla. John




Reviewed by Jon Willey	10/19/2010

Karla, Jerry Bolton has so aptly summed my impressions of your beautiful poem. So what if, you just make certain that you continue to share your creative thoughts with us poetically. Love and peace to you my dear friend. Jon Michael




Reviewed by D Johnson	10/19/2010

a very good question, what if? cheers, dan




Reviewed by Paul Berube	10/19/2010

Very nice piece of work, Karla.




Reviewed by Christine Tsen	10/19/2010

Profound and wonderfully inquisitive ~ I love to feel connected, and final good-byes are just too painful for any reason. Best Wishes, Christine




Reviewed by Felix Perry	10/19/2010

We may not mourn but just as we feel a sense of sadness when we see a loved one depart on a long trip or move away we would still feel sadness but with the knowledge that we will meet again it becomes barabble. fee




Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado	10/19/2010

Wonderful writing and picture, Karla; well done! BRAVA! (((HUGS))) and much love, your twin, Karen Lynn. :D




Reviewed by Peter Schlosser (Reader)	10/19/2010

I was chatting with a woman the other day who works in a hospice, speaking of dying. She told me that the one thing she hears her patients say overwhelmingly is: "I wish I had forgiven myself earlier." Words of wisdom.




Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)	10/19/2010

I am at peace with whatever season it is, although I have to admit summer tests my resolve. New beginnings can begin at any time, it is not seasonal. I have learned a valuable lesson in my older years that I wish I had learned and understood in my youth. "It is all about priorities!"

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