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OnepoetGem *the Poetic Rapper

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I wrote this in response to one of our fellow poets and those like him, who feel they can come around trying to tell me how to write, rhyme and edit my verse. I say this, you don't like my den, keep the freak out, cause I verse as I want, I'm not into public opinion. Listening to jealous fools have caused some of my friends to leave the den. I'm still here, been here for years, faced tougher hating fools than you Steve Chering. Thats right I called your name! I tried to ignore your bullcrap reviews but not anymore. I'm going to poetically take it to your azz. You ten title want a be! Write some more verse then come back to see me.


I'm rough around the edge
tiptoeing on the ledge
I have no perfection pledge
I sit on a do it my way ridge
More or less a mountain high
so if you're full of it
you might want to pass me by
I look down on no one but me
OnepoetGem on my bio
that you see
I don't give a crap how others
verse and write
Mess around with me I'll be like
the vampire roaming the night
I'll give you your fight

I seek no honorable mention
or loving attention
All I desire from my verse
is to serve this poetic curse
From others
even friends family sisters and brothers
Don't like my word 
fly away dodo bird

Cause if you come around picking
I love picnicking
Halloween is for tricking
Halloween for me will never end
Ghost gobblins and goons
I will evict from the den
I've been around this den for years
faced all my poetic fears
I'll verse your hypocritic behind to tears

opg

 

 



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Reviewed by steve Chering
You said, "I seek no honorable mention!" Despite your angry review on my kneck} I still do like this!!!! "But dont worry, not all reviews are perfect" Hope this new review gives you the honourable mention you deserve.
Keep writing.
Reviewed by - - - - - TRASK
Call It Like It Is...A D If It Isn't Jesus Freaks Its Jesus (Creeps) Creaks...

Keep On Telling It Like It Is...

Etal: My News Says:

...You Can't Handle It Go Someplace Else...

TRASK
Reviewed by George Carroll
Good one and right on. To hell with the detractors unless they are constructive they are not true poets. Keep writing

George Carroll
Reviewed by Lew Duffey
Hey, buddy. Nobody forced them here. If they send their so-called expertise respond or don't. That's their problem. Non the less, you might pick up something useful now and then. Otherwise just keep on writing.
God bless,
Lew
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