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Winter Song
by Christine Alwin
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Winter Song

 

Arms laced in black,
in solitude she played,
breath escaped in frigid air,
wishing it was her pain,
music wept white flakes,
that showered her in darkness,
to cleanse and sooth her soul,
where shadows cast her love,
though, it was not enough,
she froze on that winter night,
while playing their song

 

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Reviewed by Rafika Anderson (Reader)
What a tenderly rendered tragedy. I was caught up in the contradictions inherent in your imagery. Nice pacing and rhythm in your writing that adds to the colorful depiction of the scene.

Happy holidays!

-=ra=-
Reviewed by Emile Tubiana
Dear Christine, I feel sorry for the lovely lady. I love the violin. She would have been much appreciated in our warm house. Nice picture and nice description. Love Emile
Reviewed by D. Vegas
Sad...
Always,
Deborah
Reviewed by Jon Willey
Christine you have captured the melancholy theme of a dying love on a black and white canvas of clefs my dear friend. Beautifully executed. Love and peace to you. Jon Michael
Reviewed by JMS Bell
AND WE ALL HAVE KNOWN SUCH A TIME...A NIGHT...AT SOME TIME IN OUR LIVES...JUST NEVER KNEW WHAT TO CALL IT...'TIL NOW. THIS IS A KEEPER THAT IS DONE SO VERY WELL. THANKS FOR SHARING, LOVE, BLESSINGS & FAITH...JOYCE * HIS INSPIRATIONS
Reviewed by Kate Burnside
How well you write the words in blacks and whites of this canvas of emotion, this music-score of wounded love. Melancholic notes that melt the snows and freeze the eternal flame, sealing its fire in forever. So evocative and deeply etched, Christine. Marvellous pain-ting! xx
Reviewed by Natasha Bowman
Haunting. I love winter.
Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan
tragic-but kina beautiful as well
Reviewed by Axilea MU
A fairy tale gone wrong? Love the lines: "breath escaped in frigid air,
wishing it was her pain"

Axilea
Reviewed by Regis Auffray
Such a lovely ode to the coming season and all it conjures up via your verses, Christine. Thank you for sharing this gift. Love and best wishes to you,

Regis
Reviewed by Peter Schlosser (Reader)
you've spoken volumes with just a few poignant lines. i love poetry like this, emotive and vivid. i'm off to Vegas for the weekend. oh dear!! have a great weekend and talk to you later.
Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado
Beautiful writing, Christine; love it!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Texas, Karen Lynn. :D
Reviewed by Victoria's Poetry & Voices of Muse
where can pain go?
but into the arms of love's embrace
to know healing & comfort
your poem moves me deeply Christine
your tenderness so beautiful
and your photo image is awesome too

Love's Song Evermore
Vickie
Reviewed by Annabel Sheila
Hauntingly beautiful, Christine.....you have captured the essence of the picture to perfection!!! Gorgeous poetry!

Anna
Reviewed by Liana Margiva
VERY BEAUTIFUL!!!!!!!!!!! Liana Margiva
Reviewed by Darkly Angelic
Enchanting, a beautiful piece
Reviewed by Dawn Anderson
Such longing and pain in this Christine...and so beautifully written!
Reviewed by Douglas Bentley
Stunning
Left me frozen in time.
Reviewed by neerja gandhi
very intense..music eases the pain as does good writing,Christine. well put up. best wishes. neerja
Reviewed by TONY NERONE
Dark powerful piece, very good.


Namaste
Tony
Reviewed by John Flanagan
Pain and longing wrapped in superb lyricism, this is my new favourite of yours, Christine, and I'm saving it.

John
Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)
New style for you, my friend, and I love the somber, tragic tale. Ten to one you saw the picture first and worked out this outstanding poem to go with it. I do that from time to time also. Impressive.
Reviewed by Amber Moonstone
Absolutely gorgeous poetry! I can feel the power of the passion in this piece.

Miss you,
Peace, love and light,
Amber
Reviewed by Felix Perry
I feel this one more than I would like Chrissie for it is a song of the heart and a heart song is real...especially when washed in teardrops...
hugs
fee
Reviewed by George Carroll
Love the pic and poem. Exceptional.
Reviewed by Connie Faust
Too sad a story, but your picture and words definitely brought it to life. Fine work, Christine, even though you made me feel depressed.
Oh, my, I want to cry.
Connie
Reviewed by Christine Tsen
This is gorgeous! A beautiful and profound lyrical poem.
Ever,
Christine
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