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Winter Song
by Christine Alwin

Thursday, October 21, 2010
Rated "PG" by the Author.
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Winter Song

 

Arms laced in black,
in solitude she played,
breath escaped in frigid air,
wishing it was her pain,
music wept white flakes,
that showered her in darkness,
to cleanse and sooth her soul,
where shadows cast her love,
though, it was not enough,
she froze on that winter night,
while playing their song

 

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Reviewed by Rafika Anderson (Reader) 12/31/2010
What a tenderly rendered tragedy. I was caught up in the contradictions inherent in your imagery. Nice pacing and rhythm in your writing that adds to the colorful depiction of the scene.

Happy holidays!

-=ra=-
Reviewed by Emile Tubiana 12/16/2010
Dear Christine, I feel sorry for the lovely lady. I love the violin. She would have been much appreciated in our warm house. Nice picture and nice description. Love Emile
Reviewed by D. Vegas 11/1/2010
Sad...
Always,
Deborah
Reviewed by Jon Willey 10/28/2010
Christine you have captured the melancholy theme of a dying love on a black and white canvas of clefs my dear friend. Beautifully executed. Love and peace to you. Jon Michael
Reviewed by JMS Bell 10/26/2010
AND WE ALL HAVE KNOWN SUCH A TIME...A NIGHT...AT SOME TIME IN OUR LIVES...JUST NEVER KNEW WHAT TO CALL IT...'TIL NOW. THIS IS A KEEPER THAT IS DONE SO VERY WELL. THANKS FOR SHARING, LOVE, BLESSINGS & FAITH...JOYCE * HIS INSPIRATIONS
Reviewed by Kate Burnside 10/26/2010
How well you write the words in blacks and whites of this canvas of emotion, this music-score of wounded love. Melancholic notes that melt the snows and freeze the eternal flame, sealing its fire in forever. So evocative and deeply etched, Christine. Marvellous pain-ting! xx
Reviewed by Natasha Bowman 10/24/2010
Haunting. I love winter.
Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan 10/23/2010
tragic-but kina beautiful as well
Reviewed by Axilea MU 10/23/2010
A fairy tale gone wrong? Love the lines: "breath escaped in frigid air,
wishing it was her pain"

Axilea
Reviewed by Regis Auffray 10/22/2010
Such a lovely ode to the coming season and all it conjures up via your verses, Christine. Thank you for sharing this gift. Love and best wishes to you,

Regis
Reviewed by Peter Schlosser (Reader) 10/22/2010
you've spoken volumes with just a few poignant lines. i love poetry like this, emotive and vivid. i'm off to Vegas for the weekend. oh dear!! have a great weekend and talk to you later.
Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado 10/22/2010
Beautiful writing, Christine; love it!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Texas, Karen Lynn. :D
Reviewed by Victoria's Poetry & Voices of Muse 10/22/2010
where can pain go?
but into the arms of love's embrace
to know healing & comfort
your poem moves me deeply Christine
your tenderness so beautiful
and your photo image is awesome too

Love's Song Evermore
Vickie
Reviewed by Annabel Sheila 10/22/2010
Hauntingly beautiful, Christine.....you have captured the essence of the picture to perfection!!! Gorgeous poetry!

Anna
Reviewed by Liana Margiva 10/22/2010
VERY BEAUTIFUL!!!!!!!!!!! Liana Margiva
Reviewed by Darkly Angelic 10/21/2010
Enchanting, a beautiful piece
Reviewed by Dawn Anderson 10/21/2010
Such longing and pain in this Christine...and so beautifully written!
Reviewed by Douglas Bentley 10/21/2010
Stunning
Left me frozen in time.
Reviewed by neerja gandhi 10/21/2010
very intense..music eases the pain as does good writing,Christine. well put up. best wishes. neerja
Reviewed by TONY NERONE 10/21/2010
Dark powerful piece, very good.


Namaste
Tony
Reviewed by John Flanagan 10/21/2010
Pain and longing wrapped in superb lyricism, this is my new favourite of yours, Christine, and I'm saving it.

John
Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader) 10/21/2010
New style for you, my friend, and I love the somber, tragic tale. Ten to one you saw the picture first and worked out this outstanding poem to go with it. I do that from time to time also. Impressive.
Reviewed by Amber Moonstone 10/21/2010
Absolutely gorgeous poetry! I can feel the power of the passion in this piece.

Miss you,
Peace, love and light,
Amber
Reviewed by Felix Perry 10/21/2010
I feel this one more than I would like Chrissie for it is a song of the heart and a heart song is real...especially when washed in teardrops...
hugs
fee
Reviewed by George Carroll 10/21/2010
Love the pic and poem. Exceptional.
Reviewed by Connie Faust 10/21/2010
Too sad a story, but your picture and words definitely brought it to life. Fine work, Christine, even though you made me feel depressed.
Oh, my, I want to cry.
Connie
Reviewed by Christine Tsen 10/21/2010
This is gorgeous! A beautiful and profound lyrical poem.
Ever,
Christine



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