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Hope You're Missin Me
by Rose M Rideout

Tuesday, October 26, 2010
Rated "G" by the Author.
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I thought this one would make a neat tune and so I put music to it and I must say it sounds pretty good.
Just to let you know I haven't been around too much as Hubby isn't doing the greatest, yes he is back to work, which is a struggle and the Doctor wants him off work for at least two years. I am sure each day will be better then the day before. Until then, he is my top priority. I do love and miss you.


Tell me You’re Missin me
Like I’m’Missin you
October 23, 2010
By Rose Marie Rideout

 

 


Chorus
I sat down by the window and I cried,
Wondering again where you had gone.
I’ve asked mysef over again,
What could I have done, that’s so wrong.

He says that he loves me but I don’t understand
Where he goes  out alone at night, if he’s just my man.
Tell me you’re missin me, Like I’m missin you,
That’s it’s not for another, that you’d be untrue .
Help wipe those tears you’ve made me cry,
Please tell me darling, help me understand why.
CHORUS
He takes of his coat and stares out the glass,
Though he was searchin for a past,
Tell me you’re missin me, like I’m missin you,
That it’s not for another, we are through..
Somethings just not right, please agree, cause
You’re not getting home till half past three.
CHORUS
What could I have done,
Yes what could I have done,
What could I have done, that’s so wrong.


 

 

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Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner 10/28/2010
Beautiful, painful ... the perfect song of heartbreak. Well done, Rose.

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.
Reviewed by Morning Star 10/27/2010
Stopped by to let you know i read it and i love it!
Reviewed by Felix Perry 10/26/2010
Sounds like a great Dolly number with just the right country drawl thrown in...well done cuz
fee
Reviewed by Kate Burnside 10/26/2010
... looks like he ain't gotten too far afield, lookin down the page! :)) You've obviously found the right note to call him on home, Rose... this is swingin'! Get well soon, Fred... but I can see it's pretty tempting to stay home and make sweet, sweet music instead! xx
Reviewed by Dayvid Graybill 10/26/2010
There is such longing in this piece. Good write Rose. No! Not good night! I said good write!

Peace,
Dayvid
Reviewed by TONY NERONE 10/26/2010
Now if we just had Tammy. or Reba to sing we would be in business.


GOD BLESS YOU
TONY
Reviewed by Regis Auffray 10/26/2010
Your lyrics express a universal and timeless theme, Rose. Thank you for sharing them via your song. I do hope your husband will feel better soon. Love and best wishes,

Regis
Reviewed by LadyJtalks LadyJzTalkZone (Reader) 10/26/2010
Been there, Rose, it would make a good song...
Reviewed by La Belle Rouge Poetess Of The Heart 10/26/2010
In the true country tradition of cheatin, hurtin songs, well done!
Reviewed by Fred Rideout (Reader) 10/26/2010
This is a heel lifing, toe tapping, shoulder swing, hand clapping type of song. Excellent tune to do a puppet dance too.

Loves Ya
Reviewed by Annabel Sheila 10/26/2010
So sorry to hear about Fred's ill health, Rose! Please know that I'm sending blessings and positive energy your way....sounds like a country hit to me!

Hugs and Warmest Wishes,
Anna
Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan 10/26/2010
sad and mournful-good country song!
Reviewed by John Flanagan 10/26/2010
Sorry to hear your husband isn't well, Rose, I'm sorry.
Keep your spirits up, you're a strong lady...
and yes, the melody works...good one!

John
Reviewed by Paul Judges 10/26/2010
A delightful melody indeed, Rose.
Reviewed by Dawn Anderson 10/26/2010
Rose, I can hear this set to a country melody perfectly!
Reviewed by Paul Berube 10/26/2010
Nicely done, Rose.



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