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Cutting
by Morgan B Merriweather

Friday, October 29, 2010
Rated "PG13" by the Author.
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It’s rare that we heed the signs;

 

Your eyes open wide with the shock locked look before,

the gurgle up whimper after,

noticing your burgundy blood congealing

next to each layer of skin, by the bone,

not dripping.

 

Until, you stand up wincing, and the blood is,

 

 o

o

o

z

i

n

g

 

d

o

w

n

 

f

r

o

m

 

 The gash,

 

You’re gasping for air, choking your own incoherent words before,

that tourniquet terror twists your thought process, after

isolating the pain. And, you focus;

 

that BAND-AID, in the cabinet, can’t fix what needles and stitches mend.

 

She however, will never go to the emergency room.

She’s conveniently prone to those accidental words,

that precision knife thrown anger

that lands clean and close before,

Whoops! She moves, and is severed

leaving a ghost appendage that still feels, what was.

 

Stowed away for her, are needling BAND-AID apologies

with scar kissed traces of Frankenstein stitches

on her forehead, that  will never heal, after

accidents happen.

 

 

 


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Reviewed by Joyce Bell 10/1/2011
AN EXCEPTIONAL WORK ON THE TRAGEDY OF 'ACCIDENTAL?' WORDS. DETAILING THE 'CUT'...THE PAIN...THE BLEEDING 'WOUND' THAT WILL NEVER COMPLETELY 'HEAL'...EVEN IF SHE WENT TO THE HOSPITAL AND GOT STITCHES, THE 'SCAR' WILL ALWAYS REMAIN. THANK YOU, MORGAN. LOVE, BLESSINGS AND FAITH...JOYCE * HIS INSPIRATION
Reviewed by pat medlin 1/26/2011
unbelievably riveting...great read...a keeper....pat
Reviewed by OnepoetGem *the Poetic Rapper 11/8/2010
most creative and good verse Morgan, smiles or is it miles, miles between a smile and a frown, once the pain hit and won't leave, a smile feels like a million miles away, yet when there is no pain some find it hard to feel good or produce a simple smile or hello, take care
Reviewed by La Belle Rouge Poetess Of The Heart 11/4/2010
So compelling and with a form that makes it more so.
Reviewed by Amor Sabor 11/4/2010
Excellent work.
Reviewed by Rose Rideout 11/3/2010
Wow Morgan. You do have a way with words. Great write.

Newfie Hugs, Rose
Reviewed by Kate Burnside 11/2/2010
Great ideas and some brilliant lines in this one, Morgan; my favourite is:

She’s conveniently prone to those accidental words,

Cleverly conceived and very well written. xx
Reviewed by Elizabeth Russo 11/2/2010
A very powerful write! One can't help but feel the cuts and pain -- metaphorically so well done. ~Elizabeth
Reviewed by Amber Moonstone 10/31/2010
Chilling poetry, fiction or non fiction it still has that shock impact. Nicely done!!

Peace, love and light,
Amber
Reviewed by TONY NERONE 10/30/2010
Brilliant and compelling.


Namaste
Tony
Reviewed by George Carroll 10/30/2010
Bloody well done.
Reviewed by Dawn Anderson 10/29/2010
Morgan, this is so incredibly powerful and well written.
Reviewed by John Flanagan 10/29/2010
This is way beyond the season that's in it, no fake drama here, Morgan, those cuts that require real stitching if they are ever to heal...and even then...
your writing has shiver down the spine quality.
Yes!

John
Reviewed by Regis Auffray 10/29/2010
Vivid and compelling, Morgan; very effective verses and unique layout. Thank you for sharing. Love and best wishes,

Regis
Reviewed by Christine Tsen 10/29/2010
Most compelling Morgan!
You are killingly eloquent in this one, and I for one go down for the count when I see blood. (Your poem has a similar effect!)
Clever girl ~
Yes and Yes and Yes to all your questions I just read your e mail after getting home from spooky hayrides in the dark at Drumlin Farms.
Lots of screaming ~
Christine
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