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Dayvid Graybill

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Never Gonna Happen, Is It?
by Dayvid Graybill
Saturday, October 30, 2010
Rated "PG13" by the Author.
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Never Gonna Happen, Is It?

 

Standing in the rest room

Through broken windows

I watch you walk down the alley

You and me coulda been something

 

You had him and I had her

We both watched each other

Feeling what might’ve been

But not ever about what is

 

My eyes were on you

But I had someone else

You gave me your eyes

And I fingered your face

 

You keep walking on past

I keep watching from within

You turn and smile my way

It’s hard to be me and you.

 

2010 © Dayvid Graybill

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Reviewed by Lois Christensen
If it's destiny it will become true.
Reviewed by Patrick Granfors
Broken mirrors are seven years bad luck...maybe a bargain. Patrick
Reviewed by Don Juan Amante
desire unfulfilled is a bitter pill. well written.
Reviewed by La Belle Rouge Poetess Of The Heart
Attraction is often a mystery and the attractive one out of reach. Well penned.
Reviewed by Elizabeth Russo
Hard to be one place when you truly desire to be someplace else -- what life might be, if only ... well done! ~Elizabeth
Reviewed by Christine Alwin
Intense, though so soft and real~
Reviewed by Lew Duffey
Sounds like a love story... A heartbreaker.
God bless,
Lew
Reviewed by Paul Berube
Been there and done that myself. I can relate. Great write, Dayvid.
Reviewed by Dawn Anderson
Sad longing in this...powerful emotions expressed in a gentle manner. I like this one a lot, Dayvid.
Reviewed by Amber Moonstone
Sometimes, things are just not meant to be. Acknowledge, accept and let go.

Peace, love and light,
Amber
Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan
sad poem of wanting-well expressed
Reviewed by TONY NERONE
To me this is a very powerful piece. I wish I can relate to it.


Namaste
Reviewed by Victoria's Poetry & Voices of Muse
I know how this feels that is for sure...

sigh....buring the past
and dig'n up some new bones :)
Vickie
Reviewed by Karen Palumbo
Emotions are very strong is this heartfelt piece...

Be always safe,
Karen
Reviewed by Peter Schlosser (Reader)
The burning sting of non-event. The world of shifting strangers, quiet desperation, missed adventure, the what if's.....what a great poem!! I love this.
Reviewed by Christine Tsen
Full of intrigue, very clever.
I really like this rather mysterious poem Dayvid!!!
Happy Halloween tomorrow,
Christine
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