|Reviewed by Lois Christensen
|If it's destiny it will become true.|
|Reviewed by Patrick Granfors
|Broken mirrors are seven years bad luck...maybe a bargain. Patrick|
|Reviewed by Don Juan Amante
|desire unfulfilled is a bitter pill. well written.|
|Reviewed by La Belle Rouge Poetess Of The Heart
|Attraction is often a mystery and the attractive one out of reach. Well penned.|
|Reviewed by Elizabeth Russo
|Hard to be one place when you truly desire to be someplace else -- what life might be, if only ... well done! ~Elizabeth|
|Reviewed by Christine Alwin
|Intense, though so soft and real~|
|Reviewed by Lew Duffey
|Sounds like a love story... A heartbreaker.
|Reviewed by Paul Berube
|Been there and done that myself. I can relate. Great write, Dayvid.|
|Reviewed by Dawn Anderson
|Sad longing in this...powerful emotions expressed in a gentle manner. I like this one a lot, Dayvid.|
|Reviewed by Amber Moonstone
|Sometimes, things are just not meant to be. Acknowledge, accept and let go.
Peace, love and light,
|Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan
|sad poem of wanting-well expressed|
|Reviewed by TONY NERONE
|To me this is a very powerful piece. I wish I can relate to it.
|Reviewed by Victoria's Poetry & Voices of Muse
|I know how this feels that is for sure...
sigh....buring the past
and dig'n up some new bones :)
|Reviewed by Karen Palumbo
|Emotions are very strong is this heartfelt piece...
Be always safe,
|Reviewed by Peter Schlosser (Reader)
|The burning sting of non-event. The world of shifting strangers, quiet desperation, missed adventure, the what if's.....what a great poem!! I love this.|
|Reviewed by Christine Tsen
|Full of intrigue, very clever.
I really like this rather mysterious poem Dayvid!!!
Happy Halloween tomorrow,