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A Moment In Time
by Don Juan Amante

Wednesday, November 03, 2010
Rated "PG13" by the Author.
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there is a moment, crystallized in my soul
i glimpsed you floating there, on a placid lake
like a pale lotus at twilight opening to the moon
your cool petals unfolding to the hot kiss of night
your fragrance carried on the wings of the wind
heart inviting the wanderer to rest in your arms
and savor the fruited ambrosia of a woman’s love
hidden within the crevices of her plump desire

a moment in time when two spirits found refuge
in intense deluge of our present storm, eclipsing
half forgotten monsoons that once drenched us
in the years before loneliness claimed our hearts
and i had transformed into your entranced voyeur
watching from the misted shadows of your dreams
as you dropped all the veils from your yearning
and they floated away on the waters of surrender

DJA 10/3/2010

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Reviewed by Vesna Vanessa 12/17/2010
There should be more men like YOU upon this planet..aaaaaaaaah

Splendid piece..

Reviewed by Handsum Hart 11/7/2010
Very beautiful
Reviewed by Ragno Donna 11/5/2010
You certainly know how to get a girl's attention!
Very beautiful.

Ragno Donna
Reviewed by Chantilly Lace (Reader) 11/5/2010
Oh my what can I say but..SIGHHHHHHHHHHHH...take care always OK..Hugss
Reviewed by La Belle Rouge Poetess Of The Heart 11/4/2010
A classic moment of beauty!
Reviewed by Amber Moonstone 11/4/2010
I am floating like a pale lotus, drifting in your magical loving words taking me to places that only you can do.
always leaves me breathless, so full of romantic words and passionate verses dripping with the sweet ambrosia of your golden pen!

I guess I really loved this

Peace, love and light.
Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner 11/4/2010
Oh, my ... breathless! Beautiful vision in your lines, Don Juan. Once more, I am undone.

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.
Reviewed by Liana Margiva 11/4/2010
VERY BEAUTIFUL!!!!!!!!!!!!! I LOVE IT!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Liana Margiva
Reviewed by John Flanagan 11/3/2010
This is right up there, DJ - splendid. The images, the syntax and the choice of words are all top drawer. I'm saving this.
In admiration,

Reviewed by Victoria's Poetry & Voices of Muse 11/3/2010
your romantic presence opens further
and further inside you poetry
your poetic voice is truly beautiful
I love to read your poetry
and moreso the feeling & the embrace of it

Love's Fragrant Bouquet
Reviewed by Christine Tsen 11/3/2010
So Beautiful and tender ~
Warm Wishes,
Reviewed by Regis Auffray 11/3/2010
Thank you for sharing these lovely romantic sentiments via your verses Don Juan. Love and peace to you,

Reviewed by Amor Sabor 11/3/2010
Excellent romance dear brother. This world does not have or get enough of it and it does my heart good to see it spread its strong roots.

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