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The Time Of Day Before The Sun
by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner
Thursday, November 04, 2010
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Early morning. Just waking
up. Still dark out. Nothing
moves, except me, inside.

TV off. The only sound is
the tick tick tick of the clock
and fingers on the keyboard.

Words spill onto the screen
--- better them than my cup
of tea. Ahhhh. Just what I

need to take the chill off. It's
just me and God: love the
time of day before the sun.

(c) 2010, Karla Dorman (11/4)

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Reviewed by Marcia Miller-Twiford	12/1/2010

To make a poem this visual is the sign of a great poet and that you are Karla. You could have been writing about me except that my cup would contain coffee. Lots of cups of coffee. Lots. Blessings on your day, Marcia




Reviewed by Sheila Roy	11/6/2010

Sounds like a relaxing moment. No hustle and bustle. Hugs, Sheila




Reviewed by Axilea MU	11/6/2010

Beautiful! Love the format, the well chosen words, tight verses. Good writing from beginning to end. Axilea




Reviewed by Paul Berube	11/6/2010

Beautifully said, Karla.




Reviewed by Michelle Kidwell Power In The Pen	11/6/2010

That is why I like the late night, when I can write in quiet! Or think, and pray, beautiful Karla thank you for sharing~ In Christs Love Michelle~




Reviewed by Patrick Granfors	11/5/2010

Eyelids. Fail to work before sunrise. Genetic...probably not. Don't care. I'm no Peter but late night prevails. Patrick




Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan	11/5/2010

one of my favorites as well-very nice, peaceful like the time of day :)




Reviewed by gaurishankar chemudupati	11/4/2010

Good morning dear Karla, Sun peeping, cool breze reaching me,bright sky and distant mountains greeting me, your poem reached me with cheers, Happy Diwaali to you, Diwali is our festive day of lights!Tahnk you for your brilliant poem!...ceegeeess.




Reviewed by Carole Mathys	11/4/2010

The exact way I feel about late night...that is when my thoughts seem to flow easily... peace, Carole~




Reviewed by La Belle Rouge Poetess Of The Heart	11/4/2010

It is a wonderful time of day and you captured it perfectly. Pour me a hot cup of tea and I'll join you and God, Karla.




Reviewed by Peter Schlosser (Reader)	11/4/2010

I feel the exact same way about late night. Say 11PM to 3, 4AM. Quiet, serene, dark, feel like I own the world. Beautiful Karla.




Reviewed by Kathy Armijo	11/4/2010

This time of day is, indeed, wonderful. Thank you for such a wonderful testimony to His goodness. God bless you. Kathy




Reviewed by Eileen Granfors	11/4/2010

I love this. It sounds very familiar as the words spill onto the screen. :0)




Reviewed by Amor Sabor	11/4/2010

Tea? Karla? Not coffee? <smile> I love those early morning hours too, however, I find I have to go back to bed as soon as the sun comes up. Amor




Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado	11/4/2010

I love it, too, Karla! Beautiful write; well done! Love the pic~! (((HUGS))) and much love, your twink, Karen Lynn. :D




Reviewed by Jon Willey	11/4/2010

Karla, a time when our souls commune with nature and God. That is as good as it gets and we must savor the moments. Love and peace to you my dear friend. Jon Michael




Reviewed by D Johnson	11/4/2010

Karla, wonderful reflection... Cheers, Dan




Reviewed by Ed Matlack	11/4/2010

So there IS time before the sun rises, huh? I will NEVER see it...e




Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)	11/4/2010

Hah! I'm one of those up before sunrise varmints also, Karla. In fact I usually walk my mutt in the darkness. So you are not alone.




Reviewed by Mary Lacey, Desertrat	11/4/2010

Karla, What a 'feel' good poem. Morning is the best time of day. Mary




Reviewed by Richard King	11/4/2010

"The time of day, before the sun." A perfect time to catch up..... ON MY SLEEP!!!! My clock doesn't have any AM's before 7:00 AM Emjoyable little tickle of my imagination though. Thanks Dick




Reviewed by Dawn Anderson	11/4/2010

Karla, early morning.....the best part of the day! Beautiful writing.




Reviewed by Mr. Ed	11/4/2010

I, too, love 'The Time of Day, Before The Sun.'

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