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The Time Of Day Before The Sun
by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner

Thursday, November 04, 2010
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Early morning.  Just waking
up.  Still dark out.  Nothing
moves, except me, inside.

TV off.  The only sound is
the tick tick tick of the clock
and fingers on the keyboard.

Words spill onto the screen
--- better them than my cup
of tea.  Ahhhh.  Just what I

need to take the chill off.  It's
just me and God:  love the
time of day before the sun.

(c) 2010, Karla Dorman (11/4)

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Reviewed by Marcia Miller-Twiford 12/1/2010
To make a poem this visual is the sign of a great poet and that you are Karla. You could have been writing about me except that my cup would contain coffee. Lots of cups of coffee. Lots.

Blessings on your day,
Marcia
Reviewed by Sheila Roy 11/6/2010
Sounds like a relaxing moment. No hustle and bustle. Hugs,
Sheila
Reviewed by Axilea MU 11/6/2010
Beautiful! Love the format, the well chosen words, tight verses.
Good writing from beginning to end.

Axilea
Reviewed by Paul Berube 11/6/2010
Beautifully said, Karla.
Reviewed by Michelle Kidwell Power In The Pen 11/6/2010
That is why I like the late night, when I can write in quiet! Or think, and pray, beautiful Karla thank you for sharing~ In Christs Love
Michelle~
Reviewed by Patrick Granfors 11/5/2010
Eyelids. Fail to work before sunrise. Genetic...probably not. Don't care. I'm no Peter but late night prevails. Patrick
Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan 11/5/2010
one of my favorites as well-very nice, peaceful like the time of day :)
Reviewed by gaurishankar chemudupati 11/4/2010
Good morning dear Karla,
Sun peeping, cool breze reaching me,bright sky and distant mountains greeting me, your poem reached me with cheers, Happy Diwaali to you, Diwali is our festive day of lights!Tahnk you for your brilliant poem!...ceegeeess.
Reviewed by Carole Mathys 11/4/2010
The exact way I feel about late night...that is when my thoughts seem to flow easily...
peace, Carole~
Reviewed by La Belle Rouge Poetess Of The Heart 11/4/2010
It is a wonderful time of day and you captured it perfectly. Pour me a hot cup of tea and I'll join you and God, Karla.
Reviewed by Peter Schlosser (Reader) 11/4/2010
I feel the exact same way about late night. Say 11PM to 3, 4AM. Quiet, serene, dark, feel like I own the world. Beautiful Karla.
Reviewed by Kathy Armijo 11/4/2010
This time of day is, indeed, wonderful. Thank you for such a wonderful testimony to His goodness.

God bless you. Kathy
Reviewed by Eileen Granfors 11/4/2010
I love this. It sounds very familiar as the words spill onto the screen. :0)
Reviewed by Amor Sabor 11/4/2010
Tea? Karla? Not coffee? <smile> I love those early morning hours too, however, I find I have to go back to bed as soon as the sun comes up.
Amor
Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado 11/4/2010
I love it, too, Karla! Beautiful write; well done! Love the pic~!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your twink, Karen Lynn. :D
Reviewed by Jon Willey 11/4/2010
Karla, a time when our souls commune with nature and God. That is as good as it gets and we must savor the moments. Love and peace to you my dear friend. Jon Michael
Reviewed by D Johnson 11/4/2010
Karla, wonderful reflection...

Cheers,
Dan
Reviewed by Ed Matlack 11/4/2010
So there IS time before the sun rises, huh? I will NEVER see it...e
Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader) 11/4/2010
Hah! I'm one of those up before sunrise varmints also, Karla. In fact I usually walk my mutt in the darkness. So you are not alone.
Reviewed by Mary Lacey, Desertrat 11/4/2010
Karla,

What a 'feel' good poem. Morning is the best time of day.

Mary
Reviewed by Richard King 11/4/2010
"The time of day, before the sun." A perfect time to catch up..... ON MY SLEEP!!!! My clock doesn't have any AM's before 7:00 AM Emjoyable little tickle of my imagination though. Thanks Dick
Reviewed by Dawn Anderson 11/4/2010
Karla, early morning.....the best part of the day! Beautiful writing.
Reviewed by Mr. Ed 11/4/2010
I, too, love 'The Time of Day, Before The Sun.'



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