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Out of Mind
by Christine Alwin

Saturday, November 06, 2010
Rated "PG" by the Author.
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Out of Mind

His heart draped over her shoulders,
pulsating beat against naked skin,
her mind wandered to a distant shore,
intense was her body, fully aware,
pushing against the pull of the moon,
hips banging a drum of steel,
tummy tucked, along for the ride,
her head compassed to the east,
long black ringlets tied in a knot,

embraced by darkness, they swayed,

till, her mind returned from shore,
reuniting  with her body and soul,

ah, it is chilly, where is that shawl?

 

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Reviewed by Marcia Miller-Twiford 1/31/2011
Magnificant! Very visual and moving.
Reviewed by Regis Auffray 11/27/2010
This is truly most engaging of senses and mind, Christine. You got all of my attention. So well-expressed. Thank you. Love and best wishes,

Regis
Reviewed by Axilea MU 11/15/2010
Why did she have to travel so far to feed her mind and senses? I was left with this question... My imagination is at work!

Axilea
Reviewed by JMS Bell 11/10/2010
HOW UTTERLY SAD...FOR THE BOTH OF THEM. WHAT A WORK OF ART YOU HAVE LAID ON THIS DARK CANVASS THAT WHISPERS SO TENDERLY, YET...SCREECHES WITH A BLATANT MEANING. THIS IS A KEEPER. THANK YOU FOR SHARING YOUR GIFT WITH THIS MOST IMPRESSIVE ARTISTICAL WORK...YOU ARE SO GOOD CHRISTINE. LOVE, BLESSINGS & FAITH...JOYCE * HIS INSPIRATIONS
Reviewed by Douglas Bentley 11/9/2010
Christine, you definitely know how to bring the best out of a romantic poem. A+ Love your closing line!
Reviewed by Phyllis Jean Green 11/8/2010
W o w and W o w again!!

Scrumptious also comes to mind.

Sssssssizzzzzzzlin' !! :)
Reviewed by Victoria's Poetry & Voices of Muse 11/8/2010
this is exotic and erotic and hypnotic Christine!
Luscious Motions Drumming Desirously

Love's Buoyant Bounty
Vickie
Reviewed by Felix Perry 11/7/2010
Beautifully composed and presented from the heart but with such tenderness that it captures the heart of this reader as well. You created a wonderful feeling in this one Chrissie...loved it.
hugs
fee
Reviewed by John Flanagan 11/7/2010
An exceptional moment of otherness, Christine, and sometimes we don't know where we go but does it really matter? I think not; it's the going that's everything.
The heart as shawl is truly beautiful.

John
Reviewed by Jon Willey 11/7/2010
Exquisitely erotic and mysterious Christine. "pushing against the pull of the moon, hips banging a drum of steel, tummy tucked along for the ride". And what a ride you have described. Love and peace to you my dear friend. Jon Michael
Reviewed by Carole Mathys 11/7/2010
Mystical beauty in this sensual poem Christine!

Carole~
Reviewed by Dayvid Graybill 11/7/2010
Beautifully erotic Christine!

Peace,
Dayvid
Reviewed by Mr. Ed 11/7/2010
WOW!
Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan 11/7/2010
beautiful and filled with emotion
Reviewed by Dawn Anderson 11/7/2010
Magical, beautiful and sensuous, Christine!
Reviewed by Liana Margiva 11/7/2010
VERY BEAUTIFUL!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Liana Margiva
Reviewed by jude forese 11/6/2010
draped over her shoulders no doubt ... a heart can keep one warm indeed ...
Reviewed by Amber Moonstone 11/6/2010
I love this, you are so creative and sensual. Nicely done, Christine!
Peace, love and light,
Amber
Reviewed by Emile Tubiana 11/6/2010
Dear Christine, I am happy that in the conclusion you wrote: "her mind returned from shore, reuniting with her body and soul". The mind is our stongest ennemy we should always control our mind. Love Emile



Reviewed by Morgan Merriweather 11/6/2010
dreamy wandering, fun to read ~ Morgan
Reviewed by Sheila Roy 11/6/2010
There's a wonderful dreamy feel to this piece. Great writing.
Sheila
Reviewed by Paul Berube 11/6/2010
Sweet write, Christine. Written as an Angel would write it.
Reviewed by TONY NERONE 11/6/2010
This was a great writing.

Namaste
Tony
Reviewed by Annabel Sheila 11/6/2010
Awesome writing, Christine! WEll done!

Anna
Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader) 11/6/2010
Superb writing, and no, you most certainly are not a nobody.
Reviewed by Peter Schlosser (Reader) 11/6/2010
what a journey, need a ticket. fantastic writing.
Reviewed by Christine Tsen 11/6/2010
I love this!
You really have written a beauty of inner experience here. I followed this one with every breath!
Blessings,
Christine



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