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Is It Hot In Here?
by Don Juan Amante

Tuesday, November 09, 2010
Rated "PG13" by the Author.
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IS IT HOT IN HERE?

is it hot in here, or is it just you?

is it you with your come-on smile
and sexy eyes that pry open my soul
with the tyranny of such temptation
from red lips able to tempt bacchus?

is it the scent of your silken hair
the perfume that rises to greet me
from the valley of your round breasts
that has captivated my imagination?

did you know that i imagine you
supine on warm white sand beach
or stretched out decadently exposed
in the middle of my big brass bed?

where you open your garden gates and
invite me to inhale the fragrance of love
i have often kissed your fevered flesh
and caressed the portals of your dream

is it hot in here, or is it just you?



DJA 11/9/2010




 


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Reviewed by Chantilly Lace (Reader) 1/25/2011
Oh my ....smokin hot..whewwwwww I think it must be the two of us huh...Giggless..as alwayssssssssssss super HOT sweet DJ
Reviewed by Victoria's Poetry & Voices of Muse 11/14/2010
you are a romantic sculptor
lustful fire starter
kindlier of the flames
impassioning desires...

Reviewed by Richard King 11/12/2010
I just became a new fan... This is definitely HOT! I don't have a "Brass Bed" but my sweetie is quite congenial, we'll make do. Thanks Dick
Reviewed by Mary Lacey, Desertrat 11/10/2010
Don,

Very sensuous and passionate poem.

Mary
Reviewed by Amber Moonstone 11/10/2010
DJ,
Such a question deserves an answer, Yes it is hot in here, and it isn't just me, it's you too!

Do you really have a big brass bed? I would love to have my garden gates opened and share the fragrance of love...

Wow, you really know how to get me..Yes now it's really hot in here.
Come to my cocoon of sleepy dreams and find out just how hot it is.

Peace, love and light,
Amber
Reviewed by Liana Margiva 11/10/2010
EXCELLENT!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Liana Margiva
Reviewed by John Flanagan 11/9/2010
...that third stanza is magical, DJ, and yes, it's hot there and here and everywhere.
How well you write!

John
Reviewed by Ed Matlack 11/9/2010
Apparently its only hot where you are at...after writing this...e
Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado 11/9/2010
Suddenly I need a cold shower ... WHEW! Awesome sensuous write, Don Juan; bravo~

(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Texas, Karen Lynn. :D
Reviewed by Christine Tsen 11/9/2010
You are an incomparable poetic troubadour DJ gifting us with enchanting moments in poetry.
Blessings,
Christine
Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner 11/9/2010
Is It Hot In Here, you ask? It is now ... WOW. Sensuous, beautiful romantic write, Don Juan. Well done.

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.
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