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Lung Answer
by OnepoetGem *the Poetic Rapper

Wednesday, November 10, 2010
Rated "G" by the Author.
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We need oxygen, aka air, no matter what it needs to be there, however life at times isn't fair.

Invisible to the eye
don't get it we may die
It can't be seen
but it has to be clean
Air can go in motion
its power can move a ship across ocean
Blowing hard in a storm
it can cause great harm
Without it nothing will grow
down on the farm
In a nuclear attack there
will be an alarm
No happenings so goes the charm

Strong hands can choke your neck
Stay off the chess board in check
On any given date
the devil can checkmate
By the time we get back to breathing
it could be too late
and please don't scream wait
They say the creator is the only one
that can clear the slate
No man knows his final fate
unless he has a disease causing trait
or jumps off a bridge
There could be a slip from a ledge
Watchout soldier during the military pledge

Life will always come back to a lung answer
makes no difference whether the cause
of death was some type cancer
The stop of the heart
can be the whole part
If it can't be jump started quick again
the devil will win
Hopefully the dearly departed didn't
leave here in sin
However when it comes to men
this wears thin
Go ahead devil grin
but don't laugh too loud
most men are strong and proud




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Reviewed by Paul Judges 11/11/2010
A powerful composition, opg
Reviewed by - - - - - TRASK 11/10/2010
I've Work Nuclear Sites 20 Years--Hot Labs & Administrative Offices/Publications -- Use Plutonium, (Breathing) Other Radioactive Materials...We Built 1st Engine For Space Shuttles(WANL LABS CLOSED By Politician$) Rocketdyne Got Contracts--Never Caused Anything My Health Only Thing If Any To My Son Is Worlds Greatest Intellectual Liar...

Theres Blown Smoke Then Theres Smoke Blown...

Anything Is Can Become Habit Over Blown Like Cancer Of The Talk To Much (Blown)Evil Mouth...

Yes Devil Always Does Win In Sin --Simply Because NOBODY CARES Until It AFFECT$ Their WALLET$ Or Their Child Is ONE (Blown) Molested Killed They Become (Over-Blown) Self Glorified Martyrs...

Reviewed by Chessly Nesci 11/10/2010
That is true that no man knows his fate until it happens. Smoking is a choice that can kill. Keep going and death could be knocking. Excellent write! Take care, ~Chessly
Reviewed by Lew Duffey 11/10/2010
And with that, I take a deep breath.
God bless,
Reviewed by steve Chering 11/10/2010
Well you know 'Gem' I've been smoking since I was 14 and there's nothing wrong with my 'Lung'
Great stuff, as ever!
Reviewed by George Carroll 11/10/2010
We have God's assurance that the gates of hell will not prevail, and His grace is stronger than anything the devil can throw at you, if you ask for it.

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