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| Reviewed by Paul Judges |
11/18/2010 |
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| A great feeling to this poem, April |
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| Reviewed by jude forese |
11/14/2010 |
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| this poems captures the moment with such sensitivity, hidden emotion, and vivid feeling, i found myself continuing its conversation in my dreams ... |
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| Reviewed by John Flanagan |
11/13/2010 |
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This has the warm, wrap-around feel of a blanket or a good winter coat...sensual, comforting but probing, too, asking deep questions.
Love the unbroken run of thought - complete absence of punctuation - the interior monologue.
This is very fine, April, very fine.
John |
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| Reviewed by William DeVault |
11/13/2010 |
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| Lovely, erotic and well written. Very nice. |
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| Reviewed by Regis Auffray |
11/12/2010 |
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So powerfully sensually and thoroughly compelling, April. Well done. Love and best wishes,
Regis |
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| Reviewed by Sage Sweetwater |
11/12/2010 |
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Passionate metaphors yes you may! It's sensuous and I'd say the fall season brings out the color, April. I love the thought of "continuing our conversation in our dreams"...it's like a cliffhangar dangles and we, your readers get to draw our own conclusion...did they or did they not? Be well.
Warmly,
Sage
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| Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader) |
11/12/2010 |
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| I am not sure of the answers to all of these questions, April, but I like the interesting way that you asked them. |
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