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| Reviewed by The Poetess |
1/19/2011 |
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| Love the primal feel of this. |
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| Reviewed by Joyce Bell |
11/30/2010 |
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| '...FOR SHE COULD FEEL HIM...BREATHING HER LIFE...' YOU HAVE GIVEN A MOST PROFOUND PICTURE OF ONE BEING REASSURED THAT THE ONE SHE LOVED SO DEARLY WAS COMING HOME, THAT HE WAS STILL ALIVE, THAT HIS PROMISE TO NEVER LEAVE HER WAS...NEVER BROKEN. A MOST IMPRESSIVE WORK...SO BEAUTIFUL. I'M GOING TO KEEP THIS ONE TOO. THANKS FOR SHARING, CHRISTINE...YOUR WONDERFUL, GOD GIVEN GIFT OF POET... ALWAYS BLESSES ME. LOVE, BLESSINGS & FAITH...JOYCE * HIS INSPIRATIONS |
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| Reviewed by Kate Burnside |
11/16/2010 |
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| love the spirituality of "havened in his hold... she could feel him... breathing her life" combined with the visceral "the brine of his sweat she tasted". Such a compact yet passionate gem, Christine. Very strong writing here. xx |
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| Reviewed by Chessly Nesci |
11/16/2010 |
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| Never broken has touched my heart!!So beautiful Christine! Love, Chessly |
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| Reviewed by Chessly Nesci |
11/16/2010 |
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| Never broken has touched my heart!!So beautiful Christine! Love, Chessly |
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| Reviewed by Douglas Bentley |
11/15/2010 |
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| This transcends deep into the heart and the lungs - leaving me breathless - left with goose bumps!! |
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| Reviewed by La Belle Rouge Poetess Of The Heart |
11/15/2010 |
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| Truthfully I've never read anything more beautiful and soulful |
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| Reviewed by Annabel Sheila |
11/15/2010 |
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Beautifully done, Christine! Loved the picture....your words tell her sad story....
Anna |
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| Reviewed by Mr. Ed |
11/15/2010 |
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| Love the ending, Christine. |
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| Reviewed by Jon Willey |
11/14/2010 |
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| A mini-sermon on the power and value of love "never broken" Christine. No gauge exists to meter the innate compassion of that human emotion. "outstretched her hand in desperate search", is a line alive with our need to love, be loved. Love knows no limits of tenure and is enduring and durable forever. There is great power in the passion with which you submit your interpretation and emotions on, love. I bid you love and peace my dear friend. Jon Michael |
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| Reviewed by Regis Auffray |
11/14/2010 |
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Thoroughly captivating and alluring are your verses here, Christine. Thank you for sharing this beautiful gift of creative poetry. Love and best wishes,
Regis |
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| Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan |
11/14/2010 |
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| Wow! this is so beautiful! |
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| Reviewed by Amber Moonstone |
11/14/2010 |
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This poem is so full of passionate love and life, that it breathes life!
Simply beautiful Christine as always.
Much peace, love and light,
Amber |
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| Reviewed by Victoria's Poetry & Voices of Muse |
11/14/2010 |
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looming inside the haunting essence
prowess and alluring your words
reach from love's vault Christine
opening the gateway...
Love's Bouquet & Forest
Vickie |
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| Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado |
11/14/2010 |
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Just beautiful, Christine; lovely writing! Well done; brava~
(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Texas, Karen Lynn. ;D |
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| Reviewed by Liana Margiva |
11/14/2010 |
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| HEAVENLY BEAUTIFUL!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Liana Margiva |
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| Reviewed by jude forese |
11/13/2010 |
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| powerfully passionate exciting all the senses ... |
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| Reviewed by Paul Berube |
11/13/2010 |
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"then realization of a promise, never broken,
for she could feel him…breathing her life"
Those last two lines tell the whole story. Promises shattered because other promises made earlier could not be shattered.
Heartfelt and beautifully written, Angel. |
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| Reviewed by Christine Tsen |
11/13/2010 |
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Pure and beautiful. You reflect a sacred love that is so beautiful and profound.
Love,
Christine |
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| Reviewed by Morgan Merriweather |
11/13/2010 |
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| christine, this reads so perfectly.....agree with so much of the below....really like this one. ~ Morgan |
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| Reviewed by TONY NERONE |
11/13/2010 |
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Lovely written piece.
Namaste |
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| Reviewed by John Flanagan |
11/13/2010 |
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"...havened in his hold"...how good that is...and matched by "tears marched to the beat of her heart" but this poem isn't just about remarkable phrases or lines, it's so much more,...as Peter says, there is redemption and belief and the sanctity of promise.
Fine fine work, Christine.
John |
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| Reviewed by Peter Schlosser (Reader) |
11/13/2010 |
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| A poem of faith and redemption, rectifies insecurities and frailties, truth and love win out. Beautiful. |
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| Reviewed by Emile Tubiana |
11/13/2010 |
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| Dear Christine, as usual this poem is great. Nothing can beat true love and promise. Thank you for sharing. Love Emile |
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| Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader) |
11/13/2010 |
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| THIS is very good, Christine. George said it. Powerful (Don't tell George I agreed with him, I don't think he likes me anymore.) But as I read this I was admiring the strength of the lines, but when I got to the last one it was like a stiff northern wind rocked me back in my chair. Excellent! |
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| Reviewed by Felix Perry |
11/13/2010 |
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Your writing today captured the power of true love and it's invincibility. The body may die some day but if you share a love of such intensity as this write captures than you will never be truly separated. There is so much raw emotion, sadness but also a hope for we all must die but only a few of us are so lucky to have such a love as you captured in this romance write straight from the heart. Thank you so much for sharing so much of you Chrissie...
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| Reviewed by George Carroll |
11/13/2010 |
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| Powerful |
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