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Succulent Thoughts
by Amber V Moonstone
Sunday, November 14, 2010
Rated "PG13" by the Author.
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Succulent Thoughts
by Amber "V" Moonstone


Juicy, succulent thoughts,
fill my soul,
racy scenarious
flood my mind.

Profound ideas,
thoughtful notions,
flourish deeply within
this questioning heart.

Can I still hold on,
Is there hope for
an encounter
of the physical nature.

Are all these thoughts,
just a dream,
that will never come to fruision?
Oh,  but,  they seem so real to me.

You sit on your distant shore,
analyizing my motives,
instead of just feeling my vibrations,
and comprehending only pure intentions.

You have no idea what you are missing,
how easy it would be
to fall into my lucid dreams,
that are filled with love and adoration.

There is a time,
when all good things
may have to come to an end.
hopefully, not before the beginning.

For the beginning is only the beginning,
the middle is the juicy part,
and the end, is the end of life
as we know right now.

Travel toward the safest shore,
that calls upon your energy
to fullfill what destiny has chosen;
begin a new life that is calling you.

Come, now my love,
bask in my glow of love and devotion,
seal this bond with the touch of
perfumed essence from our union.


"Succulent Thoughts" (c) Amber "V" Moonstone

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Reviewed by Sheila Roy 11/18/2010
You set the mood wonderfully. I like the ending on this, because it's beckoning, almost seems like there is more to come. Lovely!
Reviewed by Kate Burnside 11/16/2010
LOL Jude's comment... think he must mean "stripping your gear"! :)) This makes me think of a beautiful pastoral, Amber; a loving Arcadia... if I were a painter, think I could visualise this as a classical painting by Pierre-Auguste Cot, one of my favourites. His larger-than-lifesize The Storm and The Swing depict in my mind love's unchanging through the seasons: have you seen them in The Met?! Awesome! Your final stanza is particularly luscious and echoes the quality of light in those paintings. Gorgeous, bless you, xx
Reviewed by Dark Knight 11/16/2010
hmmm quite the poem-Passionate, Sexy,and Imaginative-well done
Reviewed by Amor Sabor 11/16/2010
A very passionate write. Beautiful as always.
Reviewed by TONY NERONE 11/15/2010
Wow this is a supreme lovers writing. Extremely well done, Amber.

Reviewed by La Belle Rouge Poetess Of The Heart 11/15/2010
Such a passionate poem and invitation!
Reviewed by William Bonilla 11/14/2010
Wow! How I wish I was that lost soul on those lonely shores
Dreaming only of you, My friend you have out done yourself with this masterpiece of a romantic write..........

Reviewed by John Flanagan 11/14/2010
Such an invitation, Amber, from a sensuous, romantic woman with real love to offer.

Reviewed by George Carroll 11/14/2010
Great romantic poetry. A kiss for its longing desire.
Reviewed by Rose Rideout 11/14/2010
Wow Amber this is absolutly beautiful.

Newfie hugs, Rose
Reviewed by Christine Alwin 11/14/2010
Amber, May you be fulfilled with your burning desires, your poem speaks volumes of life and love, inspiring to live today!
Reviewed by Peter Schlosser (Reader) 11/14/2010
succulent poetry, upfront love show beckoning with firebrands to the steamy shores of paradise souls.
Reviewed by Sage Sweetwater 11/14/2010
Such an honest plea of intimacy, Amber...

Reviewed by J'nia Fowler 11/14/2010
Wow! hot stuff. Some say that there is a lid for every pot. Too bad that we have to rattle around in the kitchen for so long in order to find it. I pray you will as you have so much love to offer that one fortunate fellow. hugs, J <> <
Reviewed by Christine Tsen 11/14/2010
Woah, it's getting hot in here! Beautiful siren call, so full of sensuality and love.
Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan 11/14/2010
Reviewed by Morgan Merriweather 11/14/2010
soooo romantic....Morgan
Reviewed by Chantilly Lace (Reader) 11/14/2010
Oh my romantic always so well done beautiful sorry I have not been commenting ..been busy with a death in my family been out of town...please take care...Hugssss
Reviewed by jude forese 11/14/2010
wonderful, sensuous offering ... "patience is a virtue" well worth waiting for ... "patience is the ability to idle your motor when you feel like stripping your gears."
Reviewed by Victoria's Poetry & Voices of Muse 11/14/2010
beautiful offering Viv
and sensual too
but also a devote vow speaks
love's depths...

Love's Bounty & Blessings
Reviewed by Liana Margiva 11/14/2010
BEAUTIFUL, ROMANTIC POEM!!!!!!!!!!!!! Liana Margiva

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