by Amber V Moonstone
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by Amber "V" Moonstone
Juicy, succulent thoughts,
fill my soul,
flood my mind.
flourish deeply within
this questioning heart.
Can I still hold on,
Is there hope for
of the physical nature.
Are all these thoughts,
just a dream,
that will never come to fruision?
Oh, but, they seem so real to me.
You sit on your distant shore,
analyizing my motives,
instead of just feeling my vibrations,
and comprehending only pure intentions.
You have no idea what you are missing,
how easy it would be
to fall into my lucid dreams,
that are filled with love and adoration.
There is a time,
when all good things
may have to come to an end.
hopefully, not before the beginning.
For the beginning is only the beginning,
the middle is the juicy part,
and the end, is the end of life
as we know right now.
Travel toward the safest shore,
that calls upon your energy
to fullfill what destiny has chosen;
begin a new life that is calling you.
Come, now my love,
bask in my glow of love and devotion,
seal this bond with the touch of
perfumed essence from our union.
"Succulent Thoughts" (c) Amber "V" Moonstone
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|Reviewed by Sheila Roy
You set the mood wonderfully. I like the ending on this, because it's beckoning, almost seems like there is more to come. Lovely!
|Reviewed by Kate Burnside
|LOL Jude's comment... think he must mean "stripping your gear"! :)) This makes me think of a beautiful pastoral, Amber; a loving Arcadia... if I were a painter, think I could visualise this as a classical painting by Pierre-Auguste Cot, one of my favourites. His larger-than-lifesize The Storm and The Swing depict in my mind love's unchanging through the seasons: have you seen them in The Met?! Awesome! Your final stanza is particularly luscious and echoes the quality of light in those paintings. Gorgeous, bless you, xx|
|Reviewed by Dark Knight
|hmmm quite the poem-Passionate, Sexy,and Imaginative-well done|
|Reviewed by Amor Sabor
|A very passionate write. Beautiful as always.
|Reviewed by TONY NERONE
|Wow this is a supreme lovers writing. Extremely well done, Amber.
|Reviewed by La Belle Rouge Poetess Of The Heart
|Such a passionate poem and invitation!|
|Reviewed by William Bonilla
|Wow! How I wish I was that lost soul on those lonely shores
Dreaming only of you, My friend you have out done yourself with this masterpiece of a romantic write..........
|Reviewed by John Flanagan
|Such an invitation, Amber, from a sensuous, romantic woman with real love to offer.
|Reviewed by George Carroll
|Great romantic poetry. A kiss for its longing desire.|
|Reviewed by Rose Rideout
|Wow Amber this is absolutly beautiful.
Newfie hugs, Rose
|Reviewed by Christine Alwin
|Amber, May you be fulfilled with your burning desires, your poem speaks volumes of life and love, inspiring to live today!
|Reviewed by Peter Schlosser (Reader)
|succulent poetry, upfront love show beckoning with firebrands to the steamy shores of paradise souls.|
|Reviewed by Sage Sweetwater
|Such an honest plea of intimacy, Amber...
|Reviewed by J'nia Fowler
|Wow! hot stuff. Some say that there is a lid for every pot. Too bad that we have to rattle around in the kitchen for so long in order to find it. I pray you will as you have so much love to offer that one fortunate fellow. hugs, J <> <|
|Reviewed by Christine Tsen
|Woah, it's getting hot in here! Beautiful siren call, so full of sensuality and love.
|Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan
|Reviewed by Morgan Merriweather
|Reviewed by Chantilly Lace (Reader)
|Oh my ...so romantic ...as always so well done beautiful lady..so sorry I have not been commenting ..been busy with a death in my family been out of town...please take care...Hugssss|
|Reviewed by jude forese
|wonderful, sensuous offering ... "patience is a virtue" well worth waiting for ... "patience is the ability to idle your motor when you feel like stripping your gears."|
|Reviewed by Victoria's Poetry & Voices of Muse
|beautiful offering Viv
and sensual too
but also a devote vow speaks
Love's Bounty & Blessings
|Reviewed by Liana Margiva
|BEAUTIFUL, ROMANTIC POEM!!!!!!!!!!!!! Liana Margiva|