Then he preceeded to regard for once,
Seeing nothing before,
And seeing that a board of the world is true .
After another time forth of hearing this.
Certainly not being rather have,
We were already seen before.
Pursued the most people and so many.
Account and fresh air so free,
Retorted his life had been so much more.
(c)2010 Walt Hardester
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|Reviewed by Jon Willey
|Walt, I have read this many times and believe the core value you are relating is very similar, at least in my sense, to that of a parallax view of reality. If my impression is not what you intended I am not going to change it anyway. I like the concept it is romantic and therefore poetic. I bid you love and peace my dear friend. Jon Michael|
|Reviewed by Victoria's Poetry & Voices of Muse
|this is true to all of us Walt
your words cause inner reflection
in a very nice way to apreciate
the essence of our lives value
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