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In the First Place by D. L. Vaineo Thursday, November 18, 2010 Rated "PG" by the Author. Share Print Save Become a Fan This is fiction.

I brushed your hair For the last time You were leaving me It isn't all that sad We saw it coming Prepared for it People fall in love Out of love All the time Remember when We met...our kisses Were filled with passion We were always Making love Why does The romance goes away Take each other For granted Or things get stale Romance is a condition One that can be changed Always a new way To improve Old ways Remember Why you fell In love...in the first place

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Reviewed by Felix Perry	11/19/2010

I like this but wonder...at the calmness of the breakup, could two hearts really love and just casually brush hair and walk away into the night...hmmmm fee




Reviewed by Christine Tsen	11/18/2010

A heart-felt poem. So tragic when such passionate love shines and recedes. Blessings, Christine