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how my mind works
by Axilea MU
Friday, November 19, 2010
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forget the letters
write the words
turn your spirit inwards

forget the digits
confuse the numbers
numbness comes and goes

experiment the perimeter
overtake the tide

cushion your conscience
padded room with a roof of light

travel to unravel
mental elements

untangle thoughts
like living hair

brush the inner surface
of the vision in you

leave the lily-livered
to blossom like an orchid

deliver the echoes
to discover the voice

let the image fly
to root the essence

sense how my mind works


semantic revelation
I share my dreams in sheer confidence
warmly surrounded by a summer garden
an oregano scented breathing space

there may be a stream of light
and all darkness around is welcome
an aperture to the lens
an eye that sees the I

inner pathways are awakened
as our bodies are at rest
behind green shutters, dark leaves that interlace
there’s a place for aesthesia

listen, crickets among ripening olives
chirp as if praying in the afternoon
there may be a murmur
and all around silence is welcome

just to sense how my mind works



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Reviewed by Dark Knight 10/22/2011
our minds compose in different ways-well done
Reviewed by Regis Schilken 2/27/2011
inner pathways are awakened
as our bodies are at rest

I think this is so true. One must take time to relax, sit still or lie still, and just think or let the throught pass by.

Reviewed by Amor Sabor 2/22/2011
Beautiful weaving of imagery, Axilea
Reviewed by lili dauphin 12/12/2010
You are truly a great writer. Very nice.
Reviewed by John Flanagan 11/30/2010
Kate says it - sublime!
yes, ignore the numbness that comes and goes, there are greater forces to live by and

'let the image fly
to root the essence'

This is glorious thinking and writing, Axilea, just glorious.

Reviewed by Kate Burnside 11/23/2010
TOTALLY SUBLIME! This is my new favourite of yours, Axilea. So Virginia Woolf - but probably better! I could eat some of these lines, but am particularly drooling over:

inner pathways are awakened
as our bodies are at rest
behind green shutters,


leave the lily-livered
to blossom like an orchid

mwah-writing of the very, very best. Esoteric yet sensible. xx
Reviewed by Gene Williamson 11/22/2010
Axilea, your mind works beautifully. So does your pen. -gene.
Reviewed by Emile Tubiana 11/22/2010
Dear Axilea, I like the line when you write "turn your spirit inwards" it all resides in ourselves' innermost. This is where we can see ourselves. Well done, Love Emile
Reviewed by Regis Auffray 11/21/2010
This is so evocative and creative, Axilea; truly a fine poetic gift well-shared. Thank you. Love and best wishes to you,

Reviewed by Sheila Roy 11/21/2010
I like the word play early on in this piece. Such creativity throughout. Glad your mind works that way:) Hugs,
Reviewed by Liana Margiva 11/21/2010
VERY BEAUTIFUL!!!!!!!! Liana Margiva
Reviewed by jude forese 11/20/2010
fortunately, your mind and creative spirit work in conjunction ....
Reviewed by Andy Turner 11/20/2010
Hyper paced write.
Indeed, silence changes lives.
A silent retreat for two weeks or more will change ones life and mind forever, if they have the courage to complete it. Not many have!
Reviewed by Christine Alwin 11/20/2010
"an oregano scented breathing space" I inhaled, Your words certainly enveloped my mind, superb thoughts~

Reviewed by Art Sun 11/20/2010
Nice work Axilea...

the mind is a vast opportunity to the soul...
Reviewed by Peter Schlosser (Reader) 11/20/2010
i don't think you wanna know how this mind works. but yours, well, beautiful for certain. really nice poetry as always. be well.
Reviewed by Amber Moonstone 11/19/2010
And such a lovely mind that is..I love just how your mind works.
Peace, love and light,
Reviewed by Christine Tsen 11/19/2010
Intricate ~ what a pretty pageant of syllables you have woven together! I thoroughly enjoyed the poem, thank you.
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