|Reviewed by Dark Knight
|our minds compose in different ways-well done|
|Reviewed by Regis Schilken
|inner pathways are awakened
as our bodies are at rest
I think this is so true. One must take time to relax, sit still or lie still, and just think or let the throught pass by.
|Reviewed by Amor Sabor
|Beautiful weaving of imagery, Axilea
|Reviewed by lili dauphin
|You are truly a great writer. Very nice.|
|Reviewed by John Flanagan
|Kate says it - sublime!
yes, ignore the numbness that comes and goes, there are greater forces to live by and
'let the image fly
to root the essence'
This is glorious thinking and writing, Axilea, just glorious.
|Reviewed by Kate Burnside
|TOTALLY SUBLIME! This is my new favourite of yours, Axilea. So Virginia Woolf - but probably better! I could eat some of these lines, but am particularly drooling over:
inner pathways are awakened
as our bodies are at rest
behind green shutters,
leave the lily-livered
to blossom like an orchid
mwah-writing of the very, very best. Esoteric yet sensible. xx
|Reviewed by Gene Williamson
|Axilea, your mind works beautifully. So does your pen. -gene.|
|Reviewed by Emile Tubiana
|Dear Axilea, I like the line when you write "turn your spirit inwards" it all resides in ourselves' innermost. This is where we can see ourselves. Well done, Love Emile|
|Reviewed by Regis Auffray
|This is so evocative and creative, Axilea; truly a fine poetic gift well-shared. Thank you. Love and best wishes to you,
|Reviewed by Sheila Roy
|I like the word play early on in this piece. Such creativity throughout. Glad your mind works that way:) Hugs,
|Reviewed by Liana Margiva
|VERY BEAUTIFUL!!!!!!!! Liana Margiva|
|Reviewed by jude forese
|fortunately, your mind and creative spirit work in conjunction ....|
|Reviewed by Andy Turner
|Hyper paced write.
Indeed, silence changes lives.
A silent retreat for two weeks or more will change ones life and mind forever, if they have the courage to complete it. Not many have!
|Reviewed by Christine Alwin
|"an oregano scented breathing space" I inhaled, Your words certainly enveloped my mind, superb thoughts~
|Reviewed by Art Sun
|Nice work Axilea...
the mind is a vast opportunity to the soul...
|Reviewed by Peter Schlosser (Reader)
|i don't think you wanna know how this mind works. but yours, well, beautiful for certain. really nice poetry as always. be well.|
|Reviewed by Amber Moonstone
|And such a lovely mind that is..I love just how your mind works.
Peace, love and light,
|Reviewed by Christine Tsen
|Intricate ~ what a pretty pageant of syllables you have woven together! I thoroughly enjoyed the poem, thank you.