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Wherever you are
I somehow will be
As close as I can
I'm sure you can see
You are never far
From my mind
As a matter of fact
You are there all the time
When you are
Thinking of me
Just know...I'm as close as can be
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|Reviewed by Felix Perry
|Yes, when we love someone so completely we leave a part of ourselves with them forever.
|Reviewed by Victoria's Poetry & Voices of Muse
|this is tenderly offered
and if you don't mind my saying so
it reminds me of this question
which goes something like this:
(ask someone this)
"Are you tired?"
(their answer determines your reply)
"well actually, yes I am a little tired..."
Then the reply from the person asking the question (you):
"Well that doesn't surprise me since you been running
around in my mind all day."
or if they say they are not tired
the answer would be:
"Well you should be exausted since you been running around in my mind all day..." :)
Thoughts Like Bees...
|Reviewed by Elizabeth Russo
|The pain of loving someone so dearly and being apart can be excruciating. Few words, but very emotive piece! ~Hugs, Elizabeth|