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by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner

Wednesday, December 01, 2010
Rated "G" by the Author.
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It looked like something out of the Bible. The part where God gets mad. ~ Stephen Locke

Image (c) 2011, Michael Hollingshead, of Thank you, Sir, for your permission to use this. Fits my words perfectly. =]

It looked like something out of the Bible,
the part where
God gets mad.  The way the sky knotted

overhead, twisting and turning ((almost
like a noose???)).
The Wild, Wild West was about to get a

whole lot wilder.  Lightning spit every
which way and
the wind raised its voice:  I know right.

Where.  You.  Live.  That's just great.
Not what I
wanted to hear.  The Apocalypse was

fixin' to break and it was too.  Damn.
LATE!!!!  to seek
shelter:  nowheretorun!  Nowheretohide!!

All of the King's horses and all of the
King's men would
not be able to put me together again ----

that's if they even  f  o  u  n  d  me.  The
storm came out,
all guns blazing ---- and that was when

             up.  :/

(c) 2010, Karla Dorman (12/1) 

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Reviewed by Ronald Hull 5/28/2011
It's a good thing it wasn't true. However, recent events have shown us that we are not immune to personal apocalypses which greet us with each storm that kills.

Glad it was only a dream. You sure vividly captured it.

Reviewed by Micki Peluso 12/7/2010
Well done, Karla!! I sense the days are not far away when waking up won't be an option to flee the end days. I hape I am wrong. Merry chritstmas!!

Micki Peluso
Reviewed by Gene Williamson 12/2/2010
My kind of dream, Karla, from the mind of my kind of poet. -gene.
Reviewed by Peter Schlosser (Reader) 12/2/2010
freaking cool poem karla!! i really dig this one, a keeper for sure!!
Reviewed by LadyJtalks LadyJzTalkZone (Reader) 12/2/2010
Sounds more like a nightmare...glad you woke up
Reviewed by Mr. Ed 12/2/2010
The Apocalypse seems to be on the mind of many these days.
Reviewed by Clarrissa Moon 12/2/2010
Very cool Thanks for sharing!
Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado 12/2/2010
Wow, Karla! I sure do love the imagery and the word play in this one! Gad! The stuff of nightmares! Excellent; brava!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your twin, Karen Lynn. (((o.0)))

Knowing how much I LOVE storms ... NOT!!
Reviewed by Paul Berube 12/2/2010
Great write, Karla.
Reviewed by Michelle Kidwell Power In The Pen 12/2/2010
This is an awesome write, you painted a very vivid picture with your words!
In Christs Love
Reviewed by Ed Matlack 12/1/2010
Everyone's had a dream or two like that at one time or another...e

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