|Reviewed by Erin Kelly-Moen
|I love these lines":
And in their place
Will be a chill
And a note
The title brought me in, to an oblique sadness that ends...thankfully.
|Reviewed by Caryn Day-Suarez
|Love the last two lines...they say it all!!|
|Reviewed by Elizabeth Taylor (Reader)
|Sad, but very, very beautiful. ~E|
|Reviewed by Mitzi Jackson
|enjoy with the softness of your fonts it added to the mood
|Reviewed by E T Waldron
|Reviewed by *********** ********** (Reader)
|Absolutely beautiful….So gentle it almost floats…Thanks, Dani|
|Reviewed by Sirrus Poe (Reader)
I agree with the others this is very well done and the flow is almost perfect. I say almost perfect because of the punctuation that is inserted into the poem. The two that you have seem to hold up the progression of the poem. If they were removed the reader would then choose to pause when a breath is needed or when they feel a pause is required. In this way you give the reader total control. ALso the one after "still" really seemed out of place. I see this is included in a book and congrats on the publication. Take what I say and either trash or keep it, just my humble opinion. I liked this and those are really small nits. Keep up the good work. I look forward to reading more.
|Reviewed by Linda Hill
|Reviewed by Lady Peg (Reader)
|Beautiful write this is
loved the images in verse and how it flowed so well.
|Reviewed by Janet Caldwell
|Stirring poem sweets! I'll have some new works out soon.
Love, Janet xoxoxo