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| Reviewed by D. Vaineo |
12/11/2010 |
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Belle, Love carries so many unanswered questions...
Always trust your instincts and listen to your
heart. Beautifully written from your heart!
Always,
Deborah
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| Reviewed by Don Juan Amante |
12/10/2010 |
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| life is so filled with ifs, touching. |
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| Reviewed by Carole Mathys |
12/9/2010 |
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Life is full of "ifs" I've taken the journey myself...beautiful.
Carole~ |
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| Reviewed by Kate Burnside |
12/7/2010 |
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| Temporal time is hard to redeem, Belle, but it does have a way of restoring what was intended in the long run, I believe. There's the mystery of an alchemical compost, perhaps, where love is involved! All will work and come together in ways we know not how - yet! Writing that is grounded in sound thinking and yet interlaced with emotions that overwhelm. As always, your work is a well-spring of life that comes from a pure source and we drink of its waters gratefully. xx |
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| Reviewed by Andy Turner |
12/7/2010 |
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Such a gentle lament.
If, is such a sad word, unless it's used... ...if I will, yes I will.
Hells bells do I have so many ifs that I live to regret. As most do. It's all part of being human.
But if yer had, woulda yer have met me ;) and written such beautiful; classy poetry? |
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| Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan |
12/7/2010 |
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| such beautiful writing! |
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| Reviewed by Ronald Hull |
12/6/2010 |
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Ifs are in my rear view mirror. You have captured the loss so eloquently in your own, unique style. Kudos on this one.
Ron |
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| Reviewed by Amber Moonstone |
12/6/2010 |
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What could be, If? Always a thought, when after a choice is made. You made a choice not to go, for whatever reason, it was the choice you had to make..Don't look back, just move forward..go to him now, why NOT? It's never too late when it comes to matters of the heart..Go Belle, be happy for the rest of your life,,,don't keep wondering "if" Lovely heartfelt poem...
Peace, love and light,
Amber |
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| Reviewed by Mr. Ed |
12/6/2010 |
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| What Ifs - we all very sadly have some of those. |
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| Reviewed by Paul Berube |
12/6/2010 |
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| So many 'ifs' in life. Beautifully done, my friend. |
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| Reviewed by Felix Perry |
12/6/2010 |
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Your choice of subject is dear to so many. We all make choices in love and life that we must live with and often although these decisions may have been morally right, they could never negate or change the feelings that love brings. Bittersweet musings...
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| Reviewed by John Flanagan |
12/6/2010 |
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This poem has a universal voice, Belle, and anyone with even the smallest drop of blood left in the veins will know what you say and feel it within.
John |
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| Reviewed by jude forese |
12/5/2010 |
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| beautifully penned emotions ... spoken truly from the heart ,,, |
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| Reviewed by Mary Lacey, Desertrat |
12/5/2010 |
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Beautifully written and heart rendering. Who knows what yesterday might have in store?
Peace
Mary |
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| Reviewed by TONY NERONE |
12/5/2010 |
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This was extremely beautiful. Tou continue to write even better, You are amazing. Stay sweet.
GOD BLESS YOU with LOVE
TONY |
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| Reviewed by Christine Tsen |
12/5/2010 |
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Such an exquisitely beautiful poem!
Perhaps Amor is right, the mystery is the answer?
Blessings,
Christine |
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| Reviewed by Linda Hill |
12/5/2010 |
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LaBelle,
Beautifully written, my friend. I hope you find the answer.
Many blessings,
~Linda |
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| Reviewed by Amor Sabor |
12/5/2010 |
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| This is a beautiful piece...not intended as art nor as a centerpiece for poetry discussions that fuse into intent and curiosity, but rather, a question dominating your thoughts and coming straight from the heart. The mystery is in the answer |
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