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| Reviewed by Stanley Alston |
1/26/2011 |
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| Interesting - thank you for sharing. Much success, and God Bless. |
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| Reviewed by Patrick Granfors |
12/14/2010 |
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The Euro stinks
While Wall Street winks
Glaciers bleed their last
Got my happy pill today
To help forget my past
Patrick |
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| Reviewed by Sheila Roy |
12/12/2010 |
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A timely prayer, Kate. I like the part about the candles. For me that part is about hopes and wishes. Well done:)
Sheila |
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| Reviewed by Jon Willey |
12/12/2010 |
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| Kate, your petition of one is consumed with a soul's compassion and I do so respect the commitment. This is prayer, not a poem. And that is of course meant as a very high compliment my dear friend. "we set our candles here, there, adrift on the night" is a passage ever symbolic. Share more of your impassioned prayers with us as you like. May your prayer be answered. I bid you love and peace my dear friend. Jon Michael |
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| Reviewed by jude forese |
12/12/2010 |
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| exceptionally well written, Kate ... smart as well as subtle ... the world is in default and needs prayer beads that stretch out past the heavens ... |
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| Reviewed by Morgan Merriweather |
12/10/2010 |
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| a very meaningful, heartfelt, christmas poem. ~ Morgan |
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| Reviewed by Amber Moonstone |
12/10/2010 |
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Candle in the Wind song comes to my mind after reading this beautiful prayer..I have always felt so safe and peaceful when I have a candle burning. Back in the days a candle was left in the window as a token of safe harbor for a loved one's safe return, Leave the light burning, know that I am here awaiting your safe arrival..I have written a few poems as have many about that light that shines light a lighthouse for your loved one..
As always you make everyone think, and feel through your poetry.
I loved the softness and serenity felt while reading this one.
Much peace, love and candle light,
Amber |
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| Reviewed by E T Waldron |
12/9/2010 |
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A most meaningful,unique,and deeply felt prayer/poem,Kate!
Love,
Eileen |
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| Reviewed by Rose Rideout |
12/9/2010 |
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Heart touching words Kate. Merry Christmas to you.
Newfie Hugs, Rose |
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| Reviewed by Susan Sonnen |
12/9/2010 |
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| This is a beauty, Kate. |
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| Reviewed by Chels Duncan |
12/9/2010 |
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A lovely deep poem
May God always look down on you
Chelsee x |
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| Reviewed by Axilea MU |
12/8/2010 |
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Heartfelt and worried words that reveal another facet of you.
Axilea |
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| Reviewed by Christine Tsen |
12/8/2010 |
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My God, what an insightful poem!
Thank you and Blessings,
Christine
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| Reviewed by LadyJtalks LadyJzTalkZone (Reader) |
12/8/2010 |
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| May all touch down safely this season from where ever they are. Soft write for the season |
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| Reviewed by Gene Williamson |
12/8/2010 |
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Kate, though this appears to be outside the usual Burnside,
I hope you don't mind if I echo Mr. Flanagan: indivudal, unique.
-gene. |
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| Reviewed by F William Broome |
12/8/2010 |
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One of your deepest and Best. Thank yuu. - Bill |
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| Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan |
12/8/2010 |
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| our fragile candles, indeed! this is beautiful |
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| Reviewed by Mr. Ed |
12/8/2010 |
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| We should all be praying these days. |
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| Reviewed by La Belle Rouge Poetess Of The Heart |
12/8/2010 |
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| A poem from the soul that touches the soul. |
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| Reviewed by John Flanagan |
12/8/2010 |
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Kate writes evocative orison, tender, individual, unique.
John |
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| Reviewed by Regis Auffray |
12/7/2010 |
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Your verses make me realize once again how very small I am before all of it. Thank you, Kate. Love and best wishes to you,
Regis |
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| Reviewed by Ed Matlack |
12/7/2010 |
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| Beautiful...e |
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| Reviewed by Rafika Anderson |
12/7/2010 |
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| Very touching words, tenderly released into the atmosphere, like soft feathers of thought and feeling floating to meet the soil. Beautiful. |
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| Reviewed by Andy Turner |
12/7/2010 |
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Indeed, life is certainly fragile. The domino effect will soon affect much of europe.
Last-line is rather cryptic and feels out of sync with the poem, to my Pooh brain. |
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| Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado |
12/7/2010 |
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Excellent writing, Kate; well done!
(((HUGS)) and much love, your friend in America, Karen Lynn in Texas. :D |
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| Reviewed by Debby Rosenberg |
12/7/2010 |
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| said with loving intent... |
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| Reviewed by George Carroll |
12/7/2010 |
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You sure can walk me through a maze of your thoughts but welcome home Kate.
George |
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