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by Andy James Turner

Wednesday, December 08, 2010
Rated "G" by the Author.
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I woke up with this inside my head.

Leaving the public home
I realise that I am all alone
In front of me are thugs
Iím beaten and Iím mugged, as
They relieve me of my cash

I didnít feel the knife, my head
Lands with a crash, thatís
Left me contorted, feeling distorted
Fighting for my life

Oh dear, oh dear what do
I tell my wife? I was meant
To buy a curry, she wanted
It in a hurry, everything looks
So blurry, the snow flurry is
Turning red

In a hospital bed, a tourniquet
Around my head, my wife thought
I was dead, so much is left unsaid

The bedpost doesnít make
A good host, itís telling me
That Iím toast, a conversation
Engrossed, I threaten to make
It a whipping post, as I become a ghost

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Reviewed by Jon Willey 12/11/2010
Andy, you found this inside your head my friend, a. Perish the thought. This evening before retiring sip an extra glass of wine. It will turn your nightmare into amorous dreams. Sleep tight my dear friend. I bid you love and peace. Jon Michael
Reviewed by Morgan Merriweather 12/10/2010
that's one way to wake up! excellent poem ghostly. Poem
Reviewed by Ed Matlack 12/10/2010
No dyin' too soon young man, not even in your dreams...e
Reviewed by Victoria's Poetry & Voices of Muse 12/9/2010
wow...this is wild Andy
I think it would be frightful
to be a ghost...not everyone can see them
I imagine it to be more lonely to be stuck there
oh got me goin...

Ethereal Visitors
Reviewed by E T Waldron 12/9/2010
Though scary and filled with dread,it's a fine descriptive poem of what it's like today, especially for most living alone. Well done Andy!

Reviewed by D Johnson 12/9/2010
Andy, a dark piece of writing, well done.

Reviewed by Lois Christensen 12/9/2010
Speaking of curry in this poem, I do love foods with curry in them. Great post here.
Reviewed by Amber Moonstone 12/9/2010
wow, that is quite a mind you have there...knowing that things are left unsaid, you must always remember to say them...great job, this is very well done.

Peace, love and light,
Reviewed by J'nia Fowler 12/9/2010
Terrific rhyming and a funny story as well. J
Reviewed by Christine Tsen 12/9/2010
Oh you poor thing, all of that taking place inside you!
No more horrors tonight I hope. Anyway, it is quite a poem!
Reviewed by Mr. Ed 12/9/2010
I hope you get that out of your head, very soon.
Reviewed by Liana Margiva 12/9/2010
WONDERFUL POEM!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Liana Margiva
Reviewed by Paul Berube 12/9/2010
Dark indeed, Andy. Well done and nicely worded, my friend.
Reviewed by Chels Duncan 12/9/2010
Andy, Andy, Andy
When will you genius end
this is a very powerful and dark poem and it conjures up a lot of images some not so good
Yet another amazing write
Reviewed by TONY NERONE 12/9/2010
Wow this is certainly dark poetry. Andy be careful.

Reviewed by Regis Auffray 12/8/2010
Dark and compelling; this conjures up different scenarios for me, Andy. Thanks for sharing. Love and peace,


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