|Reviewed by Eileen Granfors
|Sometimes our words heal us even if we throw them out into a vast silence.|
|Reviewed by Annabel Sheila
|This piece has a lovely lyrical bounce to it, Patrick! I love this!
|Reviewed by Ronald Hull
|Your dream was valid. Sound needs an atmosphere to be heard. On the other hand, to catch a dream is rare as air.
|Reviewed by Chessly Nesci
|Sounds like a beautiful dream song Patrick!! Most of our best dreams are forgotten when we wake. I have tried with all my might to remember but I guess that means they were intended just for me!! Love, and peace always~ ~Chessly|
|Reviewed by Mr. Ed
|Keep Writin, and Keep Dreamin, my friend.|
|Reviewed by Dayvid Graybill
|Yeah...I can relate at times. This is a good write Patrick.
|Reviewed by Peter Schlosser (Reader)
|reminds me of an h.p. lovecraft story called the "the quest of iranon" which i'm quite fond of as of this little gem patrick.|
|Reviewed by Paul Berube
|Very nicely done, Patrick.|
|Reviewed by m j hollingshead
|Reviewed by Regis Auffray
|I tried to share it with the world
It fell on deaf ears it would seem
So often we do not transcend
The things we do while in a dream
I find myself completely understanding and empathizing with what you have expressed within your verses here, Patrick. I love the flow of this creative piece. Thank you for sharing it. Love and peace to you,
|Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan
|such truth to this, sadly i guess, but if one thing we do touches just one other--well, then we have had an impact|
|Reviewed by Axilea MU
|Very nice! The solitude of unshared dreams and something of the human condition in your words.
|Reviewed by Christine Tsen
|This is meltingly wistful. Aren't they wonderful escapes, though!?
You can do anything you please in a dream, never tell a soul. I do it all, believe me.
Thanks for this,
|Reviewed by Ed Matlack
|And here I thought you wrote everything you have ever written while in dream world...e|
|Reviewed by Chip Bergeron
|Can you imagine if all we did in dreams became real life facts? But you have hit on a great sadness: that whatever is said or done in a dream usually goes unseen by the ones we love most...
|Reviewed by Richard King
|You too? I've walked that same walk and talked that same talk. I'm a lousy singer though, and I always figured that's why no one listens. Nicely done Sir Patrick. Thanks Dick|