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| Reviewed by Elizabeth Russo |
6/15/2011 |
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| Oh, to be the one ... palpable emotion that stirs the soul. Touches this heart. Beautifully written! ~Hugs, Elizabeth |
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| Reviewed by The Poetess |
12/29/2010 |
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| Absolutely beautiful! |
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| Reviewed by Ronald Hull |
12/29/2010 |
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Of all of the 'lost love' poetry on AD, this is the best I've seen.
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| Reviewed by jude forese |
12/24/2010 |
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| exceptional imagery stimulating both heart and soul ... |
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| Reviewed by Kate Burnside |
12/22/2010 |
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| this is like observing the metamorphosis of a beautiful nightflower somehow... that straining towards love and maturity through painful love and neglect.. the eventual blooming "alone" and unobserved. Beautiful, emotion-laden writing, Rafika. The images are lovely. May you and yours be blessed this Christmastime; have a very safe and happy holiday. xx |
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| Reviewed by Amor Sabor |
12/22/2010 |
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| Such depth to this piece. Beautiful images surround the reader. |
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| Reviewed by Kalikiano Kalei |
12/16/2010 |
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Very nice, Rafika. Excellent mechanics and structure: just the right 'write'. The sentiment is not lost on me, either, as the image of frozen planetary peripheries swarm into my mind, attended by images of a dying star...frozen star-dust, now turned to scattered icy crystals on a dessicated cosmic sarcophagus. Um.
Aloha mai e, Kalikiano |
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| Reviewed by Christine Tsen |
12/14/2010 |
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There is deep stirring, longing and agony in this most precious poem!
Surely you have created a masterpiece!
Blessings,
Christine |
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| Reviewed by John Flanagan |
12/14/2010 |
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Is it possible to recover from loss? A right question to ask, Rafika, but a difficult one to answer and we have to surmise it depends on individual circumstance and personal character.
This takes me into a world I think and feel I understand, I may be wrong, but wrong or right, this work strikes a deep chord.
John |
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| Reviewed by Regis Auffray |
12/13/2010 |
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I agree with Amber; your verses and what they express reach deeply into my soul and echo there; and I can completely relate, Rafika. Thank you for sharing this gift. Love and best wishes to you,
Regis |
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| Reviewed by Amber Moonstone |
12/13/2010 |
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This poem takes my breath away! Absolutely stunning poetry, Rafika..You haven't lost your touch. So good to read you again, certainly have missed you much.
Peace, love and light,
Amber |
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