|Reviewed by RWE SAYS BYE
|a hauntingly serene and disarmingly moody melodrama|
|Reviewed by Sheila Roy
|An enchanting poem, Fee. I love the line about the lanterns. Hugs,
|Reviewed by Victoria's Poetry & Voices of Muse
|this is beautiful Fee
lovely & embracing deep emotions
|Reviewed by Kate Burnside
|the wee firefly’s light is always the strongest
in shadows where memories are kept
his voice in the whippoorwill entices
where lantern flickering silhouettes have wept
AWESOME!!! condensed, strong images combined with intense emotions make this stanza knockout, Felix! Love the theme. xx
|Reviewed by Richard King
|Very nice, Fee... Dick|
|Reviewed by Kathleen McDonald
|A very sad and moving write Fee.
|Reviewed by Mary Lacey, Desertrat
What a touching and beautiful poem with great metaphors.
|Reviewed by Annabel Sheila
|What an incredibly beautiful write, Fee! You are so very gifted my friend! Wow!
|Reviewed by Liana Margiva
|VERY BEAUTIFUL!!!!!!!!! Liana Margiva|
|Reviewed by Mr. Ed
|Very touching; very sad.|
|Reviewed by Rose Rideout
|Oh Felix so touching, it breaks my heart. Your words always touch us with a smile, tears or leaving us in Ahh. Greta as usual Cuz.
Love ya face Cuz XOXOXO, Rose
|Reviewed by Amber Moonstone
|So spellbinding and intriguing. I feel that you could turn this into a novel...
Lovely work, Fee.
Peace, love and light,
|Reviewed by Kimmy Van Kooten
|...some can mourn forever, caught up in love's memories...but who here alive can measure its depths beyond the physical? Love has no boundaries, where tears might seem smudged with mud, they might actually be smearing all borderlines for Love's ultimate release. . . where nothing can stand in its way any longer. . .
Inspiring work, Fee~
Love and Peace~
|Reviewed by Christine Alwin
|Novel love of a book you never want to end, beautiful Fee~
|Reviewed by Christine Tsen
|A tragedy of the greatest agony of love...an intoxicating poem!
|Reviewed by Sage Sweetwater
|It reads like a dirge, Felix and the last stanza I think could very well paraphrase as a metaphorical "death"...not a tagged-on-the-toe morgue expiration...perhaps references to a rendezvous on the night shift on the docks...good time for Otis Redding...Be well.