AuthorsDen.com   Join Free! | Login    
   Popular! Books, Stories, Articles, Poetry
Where Authors and Readers come together!

SIGNED BOOKS    AUTHORS    eBOOKS new!     BOOKS    STORIES    ARTICLES    POETRY    BLOGS    NEWS    EVENTS    VIDEOS    GOLD    SUCCESS    TESTIMONIALS

Featured Authors:  Sophie Davis, iBino Pires, iJames Steffes, iKathleen Morris, iFumiko Takahashi, iWilliam Pusey, iDeanna Jewel, i

  Home > Romance > Poetry
Popular: Books, Stories, Articles, Poetry     

Tony J. May Sr.

· + Follow Me
· Contact Me
· Sponsor Me!
· Poetry
· Stories
· Blog
· Messages
· 243 Titles
· 303 Reviews
· Save to My Library
· Share with Friends!
·
Member Since: Jul, 2005

Tony J. May Sr., click here to update your pages on AuthorsDen.




Featured Book
Body Trauma - a writer's guide to wounds and injuries
by David Page

Body Trauma covers the overall organization of the US trauma system, how doctors evaluate and treat trauma victims, as well as special sections on specific injuries such ..  
BookAds by Silver
Gold and Platinum Members


Rewrite (A First Kiss)
by Tony J. May Sr.
Thursday, December 23, 2010
Rated "PG13" by the Author.
Share   Print  Save   Follow
Recent poems by Tony J. May Sr.
•  I want to be the one (rewrite)
•  I want to be the one
•  These sentimental things
•  That girl (rewrite)
•  I Still Love (That Girl)
           >> View all 208

It was a thought that intrigued me, the innocence, the joy, the magic of first love, and the first kiss

A First Kiss
*************

I canít deny
Itís complicated
Does fate decide
Iíve hoped
Iíve waited

While I have
Always dreamed
Of this
And longed to share
My first kiss

This solitude
Is not my home
With heart
In hand
Where fools
Have gone

Not hesitating
And not resist
I longed to share
My first kiss


(Chorus)
While worlds collide
Weíre unafraid
While war and tears
Are held at bay
Despite it all
This still remains
A hope for love
I have to say


I canít deny
Itís complicated
Does fate decide
Iíve hoped
Iíve waited

While some have
Merely dreamed
Of this
I longed to share
My first kiss


This solitude
Is not my home
With heart
In hand
Where fools
Have gone

Not hesitated
To not resist
I longed to share
My first kiss


I longed to share
My first kiss

I longed to share
My first kiss

I want to
Share my first kiss†††



Want to review or comment on this poem?
Click here to login!


Need a FREE Reader Membership?
Click here for your Membership!


Reviewed by Lois Christensen 12/23/2010
A good rewrite to post, Enjoyed reading it very much. There can never be too much love passed on in this world these days.
Popular Poetry (Romance)
  1.  needful things
  2.  Breathless Desire...
  3.  Tonight
  4.  Finger Me Gently
  5.  Don't Hurry Sundown...
  6.  How Much I Love You
  7.  When Love Dies
  8.  YOUR SPIRITUAL BEING ...
  9.  You Are Too Much Woman
  10.  Wild One