|Reviewed by Amor Sabor
|Very well done, Debra|
|Reviewed by Douglas Bentley
|I agree with Reg, a very intriguing and compelling poem.
Many sub-parts squinter off leaving one to wonder.
|Reviewed by Regis Auffray
|Intriguing and compelling are your verses, Debra. Thank you for sharing. Love and best wishes,
|Reviewed by D. Vaineo
|Debra, Leaves one wanting to hear more!
|Reviewed by Liana Margiva
|VERY BEAUTIFUL!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Liana Margiva|
|Reviewed by Felix Perry
|Interesting to say the least and left this reader definately wanting to hear more about this and it's origins. Well done.
|Reviewed by Poetess of The Soul Sheila G
|WOW! Mysterious thoughts linger! I felt sadness as he was taken away from many, while others stood around! You wrote it so well now to get through it! WRITE ON!! Passionate_Soulful_SHEEox|
|Reviewed by Christine Tsen
|Mystical intriguing poetry ~
|Reviewed by Karen Palumbo
|Lingering after thoughts permeate, well said...
Be always safe,
|Reviewed by A PAX
|good story line..........applause|