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Worlds Apart
by Tracey L Hardie
Friday, October 04, 2002

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Worlds Apart

I read your letter
your words
were well thought.

I read between the lines
and felt
the disappointment,
the anguish,
the anger.

Through my eyes
washed with tears
I knew
I had jeopardized
something special.

If only
we were not
separated by miles
of empty time,
I would spend
treasured moments
showing you
just how much
mean to me.

I’m sorry I let you down.

I guess that is the price
we pay
for being “worlds apart”.

Copyright Tracey L. Hardie

This poem was written for someone very special.
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Reviewed by C. Gourlay (Reader) 10/7/2002
honesty is precious...and you have captured it beautifully.
Reviewed by Alexander Shaumyan (Reader) 10/4/2002
Too many boundaries that separate us. Beautifully expressed.
Reviewed by E T Waldron 10/4/2002
A beautiful poem of yearning, that seems to say it's not just distance that separates you...very bittersweet...
Reviewed by Mitzi Jackson 10/4/2002
great longing...sad but that is how those long distant relationships go.....true-to-reality
Reviewed by Roger Ochs 10/4/2002
No distance is insurrmountable when we remember that the speed of love exceeds the speed of light.
Reviewed by J John (Reader) 10/4/2002
:( excellant write, it would seem many of us are apart from the ones we love .... j
Reviewed by Justin Vargas (Reader) 10/4/2002
"If only
we were not
separated by miles
of empty time,"
I love this part, and the background in the picture looks great. Much enjoyed.
Reviewed by Drkman (Reader) 10/4/2002
Nice write here Tracie and it should serve well to deliver the point. Drkman
Reviewed by Linda Hill 10/4/2002
Excellent write straight from
the heart. Long distance love
can be so hard, Tracey.
Loved this!
Reviewed by Lisa Hilbers 10/4/2002
Long distant relationships are so hard to deal with. I feel the sadness in these words Tracey. Job well done,,Lisa
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