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| Reviewed by Felix Perry |
1/11/2011 |
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This felt like such a one on one personal write that it seemed almost like being a peeping Tom to read it. I could feel you pouring out your heart to your lover...
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| Reviewed by The Poetess |
1/11/2011 |
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| Love your play with words and the passion in this. |
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| Reviewed by William Bonilla |
1/11/2011 |
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A beautiful write Victoria
Peace be with you
William
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| Reviewed by David cox |
1/11/2011 |
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what a beautiful poem it reaches into my soul.
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| Reviewed by D Johnson |
1/11/2011 |
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Quite lovely Victoria...well done!
Cheers,
Dan |
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| Reviewed by D. Vaineo |
1/11/2011 |
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Victoria, Kissing is the best, the very best
when it comes to foreplay---I still can kiss
for***Very True.
Always,
Deborah |
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| Reviewed by Rose Rideout |
1/11/2011 |
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Wow, Velvety alright, romantic send the imaginative mind into a swirl Vickie.
Newfie Hugs, Rose |
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| Reviewed by TONY NERONE |
1/11/2011 |
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This poem is one of my favorites written by you, Vickie. I like the thought of foreplay, and the Kiss is certainly foreplay to love making.
Love and Peace
Tony |
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| Reviewed by Douglas Bentley |
1/11/2011 |
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| WOW- What a kiss!!! |
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| Reviewed by Art Sun |
1/11/2011 |
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very nice...a very smooth flow to this romantic, sensual, and loving poem...all this from one kiss...
nice ... |
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| Reviewed by Ragno Donna |
1/11/2011 |
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This is one hot poem told boldly from the libido. Love the ending! Nice one.
Ciao,
Ragno |
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