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Making Love
by The Poetess
Tuesday, January 11, 2011
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Making Love
by The Poetess (SRP)

Sex is nothing

But a performance

Born of learned technique.

But LOVE. . . .

Making Love

Is the uniting

Of bodies. . . .


In an exploration

Of the SOUL. . . .

With feeling

That extends

Beyond ETERNITY. . . .


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Reviewed by Richard Orey 1/15/2011
We need poetic expressions such as "Making Love" to remind us all of the importance and primacy of soulful contacts.

Well spoken!

Reviewed by Amor Sabor 1/12/2011
You have captured this definition in its entirety with passion and warmth.
Reviewed by Patrick Granfors 1/12/2011
Lovely writing with a message of truth. Patrick
Reviewed by Victoria's Poetry & Voices of Muse 1/12/2011
and passion fuels them both
sometimes lust disguises itself as love
but love always reveals
each with erotic & sensual intimacies
combined together as one beautiful experience
Love's Bounty
Reviewed by John Flanagan 1/12/2011
The distinction is always worth making for the aspiration to love and be loved is among the highest we can know.

Reviewed by Karen Palumbo 1/11/2011
"Extends beyond eternity" is so true when the love is real, beautiful writing...

Be always safe,
Reviewed by RWE SAYS BYE 1/11/2011
How sad and strange it is in these fast modern days to think that bodies often heat together while spirits remain imprisoned, apart. Your poem goes a long way to reminding us that we ought to settle for nothing less than the ideal of spiritual and physical union... 'tis a consummation devoutly to be wished. Good write, Poetess.
Reviewed by The Poetess 1/11/2011
Richard, I promise that this didn't come from your poem. I wrote it in the spring of 2004. It was originally entitled, "Sex" and has already been in a few of my publications. But I'd love to read yours. It will be interesting to see if they are coincidentally similar.
Reviewed by Richard King 1/11/2011
Poetess, Like this a lot. I can't find it right now, but this one reminds me of one of my old poems in which I said something comparing "making love, or just having sex.... to a live concert, or Memorex." This will prompt me to take the time to look it up.

Thanks Dick
Reviewed by John Davis 1/11/2011
Is it warm in here?
Reviewed by Christine Tsen 1/11/2011
Lovely truth, Poetess!
Reviewed by Regis Auffray 1/11/2011
Amen, Poetess! I concur completely with your sentiments as you have shared them through your verses here. Thank you. Love and best wishes to you,

Reviewed by Diana Wiles 1/11/2011
Oh YES! Beautifully put....Hugs, Diana...
Reviewed by TONY NERONE 1/11/2011
Extremely well written piece. Good Job.

Reviewed by Felix Perry 1/11/2011
You expressed making love perfectly...well done.

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