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| Reviewed by Joy Hale |
5/4/2011 |
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| The yearnings and desires you speak of ring true in all who have yearned for love. Beautifully and tenderly written words... of the deep feelings that dwell in your soul. Joy L. Hale |
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| Reviewed by Laurel Lamperd |
4/8/2011 |
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| How true, Regis. The second last verse describes most of us. Thank you for reading my poem, Waiting Women. Laurel |
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| Reviewed by Elizabeth Russo |
4/7/2011 |
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| You are certainly not alone, dear Regis. Your words will strike many a heart and soul, as they do mine. Thank you for sharing a part of yourself. ~Love and hugs, Elizabeth |
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| Reviewed by H. Lena Jones |
3/29/2011 |
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"It's not just me
It’s all over"
How right you are, Regis! I'd say most everyone is looking in the wrong places! Pity!
Lena
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| Reviewed by Regina Pounds |
3/20/2011 |
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So it is. Honesty is endearing - well done, Regis!
love,
Gina |
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| Reviewed by Kay P Devenish |
3/19/2011 |
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Yes ,how true,it IS 'all over' the world,that need to be loved
and your poem says it so well for all of us.I,FOR SURE,am one of those who do call you:'A POET'because you certainly are.
Best wishes always
from
Kay |
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| Reviewed by baz busbe |
3/17/2011 |
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| Regis,thank you for this poem, Can really relate to your words, I don't think it was a coincidence that I read this today. great poem. Baz |
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| Reviewed by Laura Fall |
3/9/2011 |
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Regis this was very touching and just to let you know as if you cannot tell from all your great reviews .You do matter to all and are adored by many .Furthermore, you have heart for others and a big one actually so just to let you know ,your far from alone as friends sure make a difference and truly care for you!
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| Reviewed by Denise Edwards |
2/17/2011 |
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clearly defines the pain of loss. Your words are reality. Thanks for sharing!
Denise |
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| Reviewed by Steve Groll |
2/11/2011 |
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| Very clever and oh so human. |
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| Reviewed by MaryGrace Patterson |
2/10/2011 |
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| After the pain , cometh the rain ,,, then ,,, hopefully ,,, bright and sunny days....M |
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| Reviewed by bluecornflower orangetiger |
2/4/2011 |
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| " Lord, it's raining all over the world." - Lou Rawls |
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| Reviewed by Kathleen McDonald |
1/31/2011 |
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we all feel like this well done Regis
hug
Kat |
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| Reviewed by John Bidwell |
1/31/2011 |
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Oh for sure- it is not just you.
And you just hang on for the ride. We at lease get poems out of it, and yours shine.
John |
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| Reviewed by Chessly Nesci |
1/28/2011 |
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| Regis, We all need to feel love to survive. We all have feelings cause we are human. We need to feel accepted and not rejected. It is all over! We all feel the same way and just need a warm hug to make our day! Take care, ~Chessly |
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| Reviewed by Barbara Terry |
1/27/2011 |
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OMG Reg you know definitely I can identify with this entire piece word for word. Your chosen subject isn't about being all over, it is about being. If only everybody in the world would just let us be who we are, no matter who it is that we are, they should just let us be. It would make the world a much better place to live. Thank you for sharing this soul baring piece.
May the Lord Jesus bless you, and those whom you love, and be with you always, and at your side constantly. With much love in my heart, joy to the world, peace on earth, & ((((((((((MANY WONDERFUL SISTERLY HUGGGGSSSS)))))))))), your little sister, Barbie |
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| Reviewed by Vesna Perkovic |
1/27/2011 |
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Regis ..your poetry always warms my heart..there is a gentleness in your writing..a soothing element..something that makes me want to really KNOW you..all these years on AD has gifted me with the awareness that a SOUL like you graces not only this site but everywhere you go..thank you for always lighting up my corner of the world.
Blessings,
vesna :)
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| Reviewed by Dayvid Graybill |
1/25/2011 |
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It really is all over! And yes, it's not just me. I love this piece Regis! Good write!
Peace,
Dayvid |
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| Reviewed by C. McGovern-Bowen |
1/23/2011 |
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well done, regis!
carolyn |
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| Reviewed by Lena Kovadlo |
1/21/2011 |
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I am not a fan of the flow mainly in the first two stanzas. It's not smooth from line to line in my opinion. I think the following line could be rewritten: But I am not alone in this. I would definitely work on this poem a little bit. It could be tightened up and made better - mainly focusing on first stanza. The poem sounds emotional and that is a good thing. People might even relate to it. Good first draft I'd say.
Lena
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| Reviewed by Rozzy Diouf |
1/21/2011 |
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| Hey Regis love the poem, a bit depressing and touches the core of one's feelings! |
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| Reviewed by William Bonilla |
1/19/2011 |
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Well Penned Regis
Enjoyed this one much
peace be with you
William |
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| Reviewed by Chantilly Lace (Reader) |
1/19/2011 |
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Its never over darlin....you will find the woman of your dreams ..your heart is so loving sweet man....and for some reason it doesnt tell me your posting ..I love your work never forget that sweet Regis...take care OK..Hugss
Love Always,
Chanti Lace xoxo |
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| Reviewed by Kenny Moon |
1/18/2011 |
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The fact that you can recite this poem in French should wow any lady into your orbit, Regis!
It's true, though, romantic souls have to keep their hearts well hid from the cynical and the hard-boiled. 'Be careful, strive to be happy!' as the Desiderata advises so wisely.
best wishes kenny |
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| Reviewed by Michelle Mead |
1/18/2011 |
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| How true that is--and it is what would save the world, love. |
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| Reviewed by Phyllis Jean Green |
1/18/2011 |
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Y e s !!
Tout est fini, would you say in French, or c'est partout?
Whichever it is, the meaning is well taken.
Beautiful job, mon ami, beautiful job!
...late, I know, but HAPPY NEW YEAR !!
Slo Poke
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| Reviewed by Diana Wiles |
1/18/2011 |
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Human yearning at its absolute best...
Hugs, Diana... |
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| Reviewed by Douglas Bentley |
1/17/2011 |
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Some might say "Never again"
But in the end. . . .
No one wins.
Very Sobering !!
db |
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| Reviewed by Clarence Prince |
1/17/2011 |
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"It's not just me
It's all over," that's for sure, regis. "It's all ovr." God bless!! |
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| Reviewed by Jon Willey |
1/17/2011 |
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| From deep within your soul this poem poured in easy flowing ink to the page. There were no erasures no rethinking. No searching for the right words. It reads right, it feels right because it is what makes you who you are Regis. Bang up job my dear friend. You write poetry with great ease. Please keep it coming to us. I bid you love and peace my dear friend. Jon Michael |
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| Reviewed by Don Juan Amante |
1/17/2011 |
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| may better things be ahead for you |
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| Reviewed by Annabel Sheila |
1/17/2011 |
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As an author, it's easy to understand these feelings! One hopes that their words can touch even one heart....enjoyed this very much Regis!
Anna |
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| Reviewed by Joyce Bell |
1/16/2011 |
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| WHEN THE FEELINGS ARE GONE...YOU KNOW IT. SAD...BUT TRUE. SO VERY WELL DONE REGIS AND I AM GOING TO KEEP THIS ONE. THANKS FOR SHARING. LOVE, BLESSINGS & FAITH...JOYCE * HIS INSPIRATIONS |
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| Reviewed by Ronald Hull |
1/16/2011 |
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I caught it too, must be from you.
Ron |
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| Reviewed by La Belle Rouge Poetess Of The Heart |
1/16/2011 |
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| An ending, though painful, will open the door to a new beginning. Felt this one Regis, from the soul, to the soul. |
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| Reviewed by Daniel Keith |
1/16/2011 |
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Well put Regis. We all have this burning desire to be loved and wanted. To be accepted for who we are. May God bless you every day of your life.
Daniel |
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| Reviewed by Kate Burnside |
1/16/2011 |
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| Excellent twist, Regis, and reminds me of a beautiful croon tune of the Perry Como-type, redolent with the romance and heart-on-sleeve wearing of the 40s. Our human condition never changes and you have captured the universality of it here in compelling lines. xx |
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| Reviewed by Liana Margiva |
1/16/2011 |
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| WONDERFUL!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I LOVE IT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Liana Margiva |
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| Reviewed by Gene Williamson |
1/15/2011 |
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As Yogi says, it aint over till it's over--I hope.
Love the way you write, Regis. And Regis, ny friend,
if you're odd, we're all odd, living our lives through
a pen. And what's wrong with that? -gene. |
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| Reviewed by Patrick Granfors |
1/15/2011 |
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| Welcome to the human race. Should be required reading for psych 101. Patrick |
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| Reviewed by Karen Palumbo |
1/15/2011 |
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Picturesque and wonderful photo! Conjuring up many emotions in this lovely piece...
Be always safe,
Karen |
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| Reviewed by J. Pajot |
1/15/2011 |
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It really is "All over" Regis. (I'd like to be on that schooner in the picture right now myself.) Nicely done and thought provoking while entertaining.
Always the best to you,
Jim |
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| Reviewed by Morgan Merriweather |
1/15/2011 |
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| yup! enjoyed.....Morgan |
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| Reviewed by Sheila Roy |
1/15/2011 |
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Excellent depth to this piece, Regis. You let us glimpse some of the many insecurities we all carry with us day to day. Thank you for sharing. Love and Hugs,
Sheila |
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| Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan |
1/15/2011 |
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| absolutely! |
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| Reviewed by Rafika Anderson |
1/15/2011 |
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| Exactly! |
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| Reviewed by Amber Moonstone |
1/14/2011 |
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very powerful and inspirational nicely done.
Peace, love and light,
Amber |
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| Reviewed by Micki Peluso |
1/14/2011 |
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Dear Regis,
And here I thought it was "just me" :) Nicely written and speaks for all souls even if they don't realize it.
Micki |
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| Reviewed by JASMIN HORST SEILER |
1/14/2011 |
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You are pulling and pushing all the same time tearing your heart, but again you stay at the centre, knowing you have company, you are not alone, your soul is flying high, seeing all this, deeply entwining.
Hugs! Jasmin Horst |
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| Reviewed by jude forese |
1/14/2011 |
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| powerful passion in this one, Regis ... |
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| Reviewed by Ann Marquette |
1/14/2011 |
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| good write Regis, and yes everyone longs to be loved. |
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| Reviewed by m j hollingshead |
1/14/2011 |
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| poignant read |
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| Reviewed by Ed Matlack |
1/14/2011 |
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| You're right Reg, its NOT just you...e |
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| Reviewed by E T Waldron |
1/14/2011 |
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That song was the highlight for me in that film! Superb writing Reg!
We all feel this way,at times,hoping to be fulfilled someday...
Love,
Eileen |
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| Reviewed by Mary Lacey, Desertrat |
1/14/2011 |
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Reg,
Very beautiful and touching. It's like a desperation for love.
Mary |
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| Reviewed by lili dauphin |
1/14/2011 |
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| So beautiful! |
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| Reviewed by Christine Tsen |
1/14/2011 |
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So authentic, Regis! Indeed your words are true.
Blessings,
Christine |
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| Reviewed by Sherry Heim |
1/14/2011 |
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It is all over, that is for sure, Reg, but then there are others who live with fear and seek the opposite. Life is an oleo of emotions coming at us in all directions. Affirming poetry, Reg.
Take care,
Sherry |
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| Reviewed by Christine Alwin |
1/14/2011 |
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Very true Reg...and is it ever enough really? hmmmmm thinking of so many things in my head..great write!
Blessings,
Christine |
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| Reviewed by TONY NERONE |
1/14/2011 |
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A GREAT piece of love, and luster. Outstanding my friend.
Peace
Tony |
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| Reviewed by George Carroll |
1/14/2011 |
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| Well said Reg |
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| Reviewed by karen logan |
1/14/2011 |
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| I love your voice Regis. You are so real. Thank you for always sharing just what I love to read. Love and Light. Karen |
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| Reviewed by Peter Schlosser (Reader) |
1/14/2011 |
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| a lot of passion behind this one. i really love poetry like this. spring in the stomach type poetry where you don't write for a while, then all these emotions build to a crescendo and gush out onto paper. combine that with a talented pen and you have the perfect poem. hope you're doing well these days. can't imagine how cold it must be up your way. |
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| Reviewed by Paul Berube |
1/14/2011 |
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| You're absolutely correct, Regis. It is all over. Well done, my friend. |
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| Reviewed by Carolyn Red Bear (The Bear Paw) |
1/14/2011 |
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It's all over and over, isn't it Reg! I feel this one in the core of my being, as if I should have written it.. it's what is in human beings ... thank you for sharing...
In Spirit,
Bear |
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| Reviewed by Michelle Close Mills |
1/14/2011 |
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| Beautifully romantic...naked sunburnt skin. My that sounds lovely doesn't it? |
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| Reviewed by Chip Bergeron |
1/14/2011 |
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Just redmember Regis "It ain't over 'till the fat lady sings!!!"
Chip Bergeron |
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| Reviewed by Lew Duffey |
1/14/2011 |
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You are right. You are not alone in this.
It is only over when you say it's over
Don't say it.
God Bless,
Lew |
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| Reviewed by Victoria's Poetry & Voices of Muse |
1/14/2011 |
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I Love Your Yen Regis...
when it's all over
it will have only just begun
(oh see how quick that song arrives?)
Love's Beauty Knows Your Soul
Love Always Vickie xo |
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| Reviewed by Jeanette Cooper |
1/14/2011 |
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| I can certainly identify with your excellently written poem. I bet it describes the majority population. With an absence of the things your poem mentions, nothing we have seems important. Yet, even when we feel these needs are unfulfilled in our lives--there is still hope and expectancy that they will be filled. There is always tomorrow... |
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| Reviewed by Maryvonne Chartrand (Reader) |
1/14/2011 |
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| Awesome Regis!! Love it!!!!!!!!!!! |
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| Reviewed by D Johnson |
1/14/2011 |
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Nice write, Reg, love the picture...leaves one with 'wanting'
Cheers,
Dan |
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| Reviewed by The Poetess |
1/14/2011 |
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| Love the picture and the poem. Is it really "All over" although its not yet begun? ;-) |
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