Wouldn't I Be Crazy?': A Song; or Two
by Erin E Kelly-Moen
Saturday, January 15, 2011
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Wouldn’t that be … crazy?
(only now just crazy)
Wouldn’t I be … crazy
(I’d have to be crazy)
If I thought that crazy
(when I thought crazy)
Was anything but wrong?
(In between sweet lines of verse,
I dare to tell you the worst of worse.
We are crazy, if we get it wrong.)
Why can’t I be … crazy?
(wasn’t I crazy)
Wouldn’t I then be … crazy?
(I must be crazy)
If I thought that maybe
(when I knew crazy)
Was everything, but wrong?
(In between gross lines of verse,
I came to tell I mind my works,
And, am I crazy, if nothing is wrong?)
Everyone, to me, seems … crazy.
(Why not be crazy?)
Are we really real, yet … crazy?
(we have to be crazy)
If we thought, we were strong,
(and especially crazy?)
Would we be wrong?
(In between our thoughts of Now,
We dare to tell all we have seen,
Of no return, and, we become nothing.)
Can’t you see I'm … crazy?
Wouldn’t you want to be … crazy?
(you’ve got to be crazy)
If you thought, that one day,
(if you are not crazy)
We would all get along?
(In between sweet lines and gross,
Tolls the anniversary of words.
Am I crazy, to sing so … crazily?)
Erin Elizabeth Kelly-Moen
© Copyright 1/10/06
© Copyright 1/16/11
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|Reviewed by John Flanagan
|I love the chords you strike, Erin,
original chords, a music your own
and now mine.
Crazy? I'm all for that.
|Reviewed by The Poetess
|YUP! But then we all are. Life would be boring without a bit of "crazy" in each and every one of us.|
|Reviewed by Gene Williamson
|Erin, I'm just crazy enough to sing along with you.
|Reviewed by jude forese
|that's ok ... a little crazy keeps my blood flowing ...|
|Reviewed by Ed Matlack
|I guess you just have to face it, Erin, you ARE crazy, but then again are we not all as such...yep, pretty much...e|