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| Reviewed by J John (Reader) |
10/5/2002 |
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| Enjoyed .... j |
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| Reviewed by Larry Skahill (Reader) |
10/5/2002 |
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if writing keeps you from getting bored - keep it up, this was utterly enjoyable, especially the erotic part about the sausage
good job |
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| Reviewed by Roger Ochs |
10/5/2002 |
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| "...stare/ stuffing sausage..." I enjoy alliteration. A minor quibble "awkward" not "ackward" unless this is word play like "bass ackward" |
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| Reviewed by jude forese |
10/5/2002 |
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| all depends what kind of sausage your stuffin ;) |
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| Reviewed by Lady Peg (Reader) |
10/4/2002 |
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Liked this Prose.
Peg |
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| Reviewed by Vicky Jeter |
10/4/2002 |
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| So succinctly put, with beautiful objectivity. Enjoyed. Vicky |
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| Reviewed by Trish - The Trickster |
10/4/2002 |
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| An interesting write. Boredom does some wonderful things to people ;-} |
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| Reviewed by E T Waldron |
10/4/2002 |
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| boredom is a killer...keep writing;-) |
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| Reviewed by Mitzi Jackson |
10/4/2002 |
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hahaha....felt real-to-life
enjoyed the growing pains in this |
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