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| Reviewed by Jon Willey |
1/22/2011 |
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| As Tony the Tiger would say Belle. This is GRRRRREAT! No Feline connubial bliss, this. As he roars in the darkness of a one night stand and seeks encores in the day's light. Pleasure in the mane? Primitive encounters driven by his lusting for her "lithe loins". I bid you love and peace my dear friend. Jon Michael |
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| Reviewed by Kate Burnside |
1/19/2011 |
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| Divine balances of power in this regal jungle write, Belle! The love-play is just as it should be and the inclusion of the mystery, magic and deep meaning of those enigmatic pools is such an elegant feature. Love the scope of imagination here and the splendour of your motif. As always, beautiful and deeply satisfying work. xx |
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| Reviewed by Amor Sabor |
1/18/2011 |
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Absolutely SINuous poetry of raw animalistic passion. I would abdicate my throne to the queen too. Beautiful images and writing unparalleled.
Amor |
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| Reviewed by Andy Turner |
1/17/2011 |
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Even the mighty lion, loses everything when it comes to his loins. Man are we daft as brushes.
Anyways, lets go lion around in some sweet savanna. lol xx |
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| Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan |
1/17/2011 |
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| wow! |
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| Reviewed by Sheila Roy |
1/17/2011 |
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If you were to narrate the Nat. Geo channel, it would need a whole new rating. Steamy and passionate imagery. Wonderful how you wrote this scene.
Sheila |
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| Reviewed by Richard King |
1/17/2011 |
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And so it was and so it is, not really so unlike the life we've all come to know, or dream of. Fantastic Belle.
Thanks Dick |
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| Reviewed by Lonnie Hicks |
1/17/2011 |
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| Humm, seduction is a lioness. True. Again great imagery, spot on emotions embedded in word pictures which sweep along the reader: and who can say no to sweet love mixed with jungle seduction? Not I. |
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| Reviewed by Don Juan Amante |
1/17/2011 |
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| a taste of the wild side! |
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| Reviewed by jude forese |
1/16/2011 |
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| beautifully rendered and magically intriguing .... wonderful, La Belle ... |
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| Reviewed by Joyce Bell |
1/16/2011 |
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| YOU ARE JUST ONE FANTASTIC POET...THANK YOU FOR SHARING AND I WILL KEEP THIS ONE. LOVE, BLESSINGS AND FAITH...JOYCE * HIS INSPIRATIONS |
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| Reviewed by E T Waldron |
1/16/2011 |
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Belle, you've outdone yourself with this seductive relationship full of torrid passion, perfectly expressed!Kudo's!
Love,
Eileen |
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| Reviewed by Morgan Merriweather |
1/16/2011 |
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| beautifully imaginative poem.....Morgan |
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| Reviewed by John Flanagan |
1/16/2011 |
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The interplay of words, moods and desires is exquisite,
this is relationship delivered to us
on gold platters by a gold writer;
just too many wonderful phrases and lines to quote
but, "...their gutteral roars
resonate off mountains of lust"
is special, and "...the insinuation od her eyes"
packs a mighty punch.
Kudos, Belle!
John
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| Reviewed by Ronald Hull |
1/16/2011 |
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Parallels the human experience. Few lions prefer the jungle to the savannah [Georgia?] ;-).
Ron |
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| Reviewed by Regis Auffray |
1/16/2011 |
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Well I am a Leo so I can completely relate, Belle. :) Very nicely done. Thank you for sharing. Love and best wishes to you,
Regis |
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| Reviewed by Christine Alwin |
1/16/2011 |
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| You submerged me in this poem Belle! |
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| Reviewed by TONY NERONE |
1/16/2011 |
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I love this writing Dear Lady. Especially about the second largest feline. Stay well, and Beautiful.
LOVE and PEACE
TONY |
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| Reviewed by The Poetess |
1/16/2011 |
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| Awesome picture and poem. SHE rules! Hee! Hee! |
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| Reviewed by Paul Berube |
1/16/2011 |
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| Beautifully done! "she leads him once again to a pool where two pure springs bubble up with promises of primal pleasure with the insinuation of her eyes." |
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| Reviewed by Chantilly Lace (Reader) |
1/16/2011 |
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| Lovely writing sweet lady.. Hugsss |
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| Reviewed by Christine Tsen |
1/16/2011 |
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So rich in elegant imagination! A pure pleasure to read, and the ending captures a certain kind of energy that radiates beyond the page... Fabulous!
Christine |
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| Reviewed by Amber Moonstone |
1/16/2011 |
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Now of course he must abdicate the throne to his queen after all don't all women deserve to be treated like a queen of his kingdom? lovely poetry as always, I enjoy your mastery of the poetic language.
Peace, love and light,
Amber |
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| Reviewed by Diana Wiles |
1/16/2011 |
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I loved the expert crafting of your words here...and the picture you paint so skilfully is rich with the promise of the final lines...Magnificent!... like the animals you describe...
Hugs, Diana... |
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