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| Reviewed by Joyce Bell |
1/28/2011 |
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THE MUSIC AND THE 'MOOD' OF THIS WORK THAT IS ENHANCED BY DELICATELY 'SELECTED' PHRASES, WHICH PRODUCE CRYSTAL CLEAR IMAGERY...BLEND,SENSUOUSLY, WITH ARTISTIC EXCELLENCE. WELL DONE. AS FOR THE LAST LINE...YOU KNOW MY ANSWER TO THAT ONE(PHIL4:13-SMILE). THANKS FOR SHARING AND GOD BLESS. LOVE & FAITH...
JOYCE * HIS INSPIRATIONS |
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| Reviewed by Amor Sabor |
1/22/2011 |
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| Very well written romantic verses...Forbidden fruit on the vine of passion. |
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| Reviewed by Morgan Merriweather |
1/18/2011 |
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| sensual and seductive like fine soft cofection sugar sand......Morgan |
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| Reviewed by Phyllis Jean Green |
1/18/2011 |
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| M a r v e l o u s !! |
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| Reviewed by Victoria's Poetry & Voices of Muse |
1/18/2011 |
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none of could ever understand the power
of seduction or temptation
however you must know because your words
bathe us inside it's prowess...
Sumptuous Desserts
Vickie |
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| Reviewed by Regis Auffray |
1/17/2011 |
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Thank you for sharing this meaningful metaphorical offering of passion, DJ. Love and peace,
Regis |
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| Reviewed by Amber Moonstone |
1/17/2011 |
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How can one mesmerized soul respond to such a glorious poem. You astonish me with your insight into a woman's soul and desires.
Every word in this poem speaks volumes deeply within in me. It resonates and propells me into an erotic trance. Your words always do this to me..this song you chose is the perfect mood elevating music to accompany the intensity of your words.
DJ, why? How? Can you do this to me?
Not really a question but you know how you affect your readers and you love it...it motivates and stimulates your soul doesn't it....
Peace, love and light,
Amber |
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| Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner |
1/17/2011 |
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DAMN. Where we you many years ago? You leave me breathless -- well done, Don Juan.
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla. |
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| Reviewed by John Flanagan |
1/17/2011 |
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Sustained from start to finish, the metaphor is rich
and apt, DJ, and the language is fluent and flawless -
indeed a 'sigh on the wind' the entire poem has that
alluring air about it.
John |
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| Reviewed by Liana Margiva |
1/17/2011 |
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| VERY BEAUTIFUL, VERY ROMANTIC, VERY TALENTED!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Liana Margiva |
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| Reviewed by jude forese |
1/16/2011 |
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| forbidden fruit is definitely alluring ... |
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| Reviewed by Chantilly Lace (Reader) |
1/16/2011 |
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| Oh my...wonderful as always sweet DJ....sighhhhh.....Hugsss |
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| Reviewed by Deborah Tornillo |
1/16/2011 |
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| Don Juan - very well done. |
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| Reviewed by Christine Alwin |
1/16/2011 |
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| ...we don't always need to understand, just follow our hearts..this is powerful! |
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| Reviewed by The Poetess |
1/16/2011 |
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| Very seductive and well written. |
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| Reviewed by Diana Wiles |
1/16/2011 |
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Very powerful and sensual writing...
Diana... |
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| Reviewed by Christine Tsen |
1/16/2011 |
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Every tone and nuance creating an electric reflexive response in the reader creating a devastatingly powerful impact DJ!
Blessings,
Christine |
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