Shush Now, Baby
by Erin Elizabeth Kelly-Moen
Sunday, January 23, 2011
Rated "G" by the Author.
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Shush now, baby, planetís gonna die,
No time for tears, or false goodbyes.
I suss an answer, somewhen torn,
Hush now, babies, humans will scry.
Hush now, babies, forge thee ahead!
Thereís time for fear, sin and dread.
I suss a question, somewhere borne,
Shush now, baby, I think youíre dead.
Erin Elizabeth Kelly-Moen
© Copyright 1/23/11
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|Reviewed by Felix Perry
|Dark and stark but definately striking and cutting edge of madness but then again aren't all poets siting on the edge of that fence.
|Reviewed by The Poetess
|OUCH! That ending cuts deep.|
|Reviewed by Christine Tsen
|Full of dramatic flair, haunting!
|Reviewed by John Flanagan
|Some lullaby, Erin!
But you're right on the money.
|Reviewed by Ed Matlack
|Interesting thoughts do really circulate in that head of yours, Erin...e|
|Reviewed by Gene Williamson
|Shush now, Baby, it's time for bed. -gene.|