|Reviewed by Gene Williamson
|Pat, you're permitted to be bad, or thin k of being bad,
as long as you continue to turn out gems like this. I
like your rhyme scheme. -gene.
|Reviewed by Connie Faust
|Nice surprise ending, just when I expected you to be really, really bad! This is so cute!
|Reviewed by Donna Chandler
|Cute, clever and fun to read. Sounds just like someone I know. :)
|Reviewed by Lavendar Jazz
|Reviewed by John Flanagan
|Nice movement and rhythm, Pat,
and just the right effects throughout.
|Reviewed by Patrick Granfors
|Good schmood. First stanza yesterday did it all except for dinner, sausages and kraut. Second stanza did it all except hold my breath, that's reserved for my night sleep. Third stanza did it all plus plugged the toilet. Amateur.|
|Reviewed by TONY NERONE
|Sometimes it is fun to be bad. Nicely written piece.
|Reviewed by Christine Tsen
|Playful and clever!
|Reviewed by D Johnson
|Just remember, you can be as 'good' or as 'bad' as you want to be...because you are the boss of you.
|Reviewed by Richard King
|You call that bad? You've got a lot to learn girl. Like it though, as always. Thanks Dick|
|Reviewed by Chessly Nesci
|This is so cute I love it! Take care, Chessly|
|Reviewed by Regis Auffray
|Another delightful concoction, Pat. Nice flow too. There is a typo in the first verse of the second stanza ("sleam"). Thanks for sharing. Love and best wishes,