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Itís Over
by Dayvid Graybill
Thursday, January 27, 2011
Rated "PG13" by the Author.
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It’s Over


He wants out

Not easy to quit

Goes against all he is

But can’t live in boredom

Goes away

Will he go back?

Heart cares for her

Love is gone

Wants the best

For her

And him


Her birthday

He calls

She thinks it’s love

He says it’s not

She cries

He doesn’t


Moving on

New job

New city

He’s gone



2011 © Dayvid Graybill


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Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan 1/29/2011
i agree with Victoria-the truth is always best! i love the truth in your write!
Reviewed by Victoria's Poetry & Voices of Muse 1/29/2011
"She cries
He doesnít"

If I were her, I would want to be hurt
with the truth
rather than destroyed with a lie
and this piece of heart speaking poetry
really speaks of a loving heart which
does not need to be torn...

Love's Bounty
Reviewed by TONY NERONE 1/27/2011
I can relate to this very fine writing.

Reviewed by Gene Williamson 1/27/2011
Like the man says, breaking up is hard to do.
It takes an accomplished poet to do it in style.
Your style, Dayvid. -gene.
Reviewed by Patrick Granfors 1/27/2011
It takes two to tango
Always has always will
So when you care
But not enough
Your solution's correct
But awfully tough

Reviewed by John Bidwell 1/27/2011
So many relationships are dying, but linger like a beloved pet no one has the heart to put down.
This is deeply moving indeed.

Reviewed by Branch Isole 1/27/2011
"And so it goes"
so aptly described here
Reviewed by Christine Tsen 1/27/2011
I think this is wonderful, Dayvid, partly because it can be interpreted in so many ways. I like the way you have kept it terse. For me, it reminds me that love involves being honest with who we are, what we need and want, and having the nobility to give others that right too. I think this guy did her a favor by that honesty.
Reviewed by Paul Judges 1/27/2011
Well written, Dayvid
Reviewed by Lois Christensen 1/27/2011
so sad, too much breakups in this world.
Reviewed by Peter Schlosser (Reader) 1/27/2011
the one who cares the least about the relationship ultimately controls it. funny paradox that; but that's how it goes- new job, new city, he's gone, no tears. she'll be eating lots of ice cream getting over this one:-)
Reviewed by Chessly Nesci 1/27/2011
Dayvid, When it's over it's over.. We stay in the relationship because we know they still care and don't want to cause any pain...Everyone deserves to be happy so he did the right thing by moving on... Real to life poetry that I can relate to very well. Peace always, ~Chessly
Reviewed by D Johnson 1/27/2011
I am an alumnus of the "It's Over" club; it took a while to realize the ultimate reality which you have displayed in your poem. Nice write.

Reviewed by Paul Berube 1/27/2011
Well understood, Dayvid.
Reviewed by Linda Hill 1/27/2011

Excellent poetry, as Diana says the starkness of the verses add alot to the effect. Enjoyed this!

Reviewed by Diana Wiles 1/27/2011
It is sad when love is finally gone, but a level of care still remains. The 'other' still hangs on...wishing, hoping it still means.. something. Brilliantly written..the starkness of the layout and words hilight the situation...
Hugs, Diana
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