|Reviewed by Ed Matlack
|Tis a shame the Old Man fell down...I remember seeing that when my parents took me to NH when I was about your age Jonathan...an excellent write...ed|
|Reviewed by Regis Auffray
|Congratulations to Jonathan and thank you for sharing his poem, Paul. Love, peace, and blessings to you both,
|Reviewed by Patrick Granfors
|Outstanding! eleven going on twenty. Patrick|
|Reviewed by MaryGrace Patterson
|Wow what a great poem. Your son has inherited your talent!.....M|
|Reviewed by C. McGovern-Bowen
|Well done, Jonathan!
|Reviewed by Cindy Tuttle
|Wow!! What a gift!!! Good for him. Keep writing Jonathan!
|Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado
|Jonathan has your poetic talents! Good on him! And good on you for sharing this budding young poet's words! Well done, Jonathan, and thank you, Paul, for sharing! Well done, both of you; bravo! Bravo!!
(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Texas, Karen Lynn. :D
|Reviewed by Connie Faust
|I love the way Jonathan personalizes the old man. It's a beautiful, sentimental poem.
Jonathan, it's obvious you put a lot of thought and work into this poem. Very well done!
|Reviewed by Diana Wiles
|This is heartfelt work and superb writing for one of such tender years...He has a certain type of special gift, just like his Dad...!
Well done Jonathan...and.. what a talented son Paul..
|Reviewed by Chantilly Lace (Reader)
|Awesome writing..you taught him well sweet man..well done indeed...Hugss to both of you|
|Reviewed by Morgan Merriweather
|This is the work of someone who is a conscientious writer. Alot of time and care went into this work. The spirit shows. Well done. Morgan|
|Reviewed by TONY NERONE
|Wonderfully crafted, Paul.
GOD BLESS YOU
|Reviewed by John Bidwell
That's how it starts.
Even with your introduction I just found myself missing the old man.
I can't believe for all the times I've been through New Hampshire I just never got there. You always think there will be time...maybe next year.
But honestly- there was no distraction of a child's effort, this was just poetry.
Hope we see more.